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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 6 Comments
Date Added: September 18, 2009 22:09:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Chasing Tumbleweeds
have you ever heard of...
 a message in a bottle?
or a message carried on the wings
of a pure white dove?
well I dont live near the sea
so i will have to
use my imagination
to find my soul mate
 
on my way to work
i passed through the wild desert
and the tumbleweeds caught my eye
that's it!
i could tie ribbons to the stems of tumbleweeds
 ribbons with printed messages
 clues to my temperment
 
a symbol of my splendor developed on the peaceful stage
as a space-science pioneer
a pink ribbon with the word Dramatic
a purple; inscribed with Witty
yellow for Clarity
green for Sensitivity
white or silver to suggest...
my Chastened Spirit
no need for excessive ornamentation
 in touch with real emotions
no plastic imitation
so if one day you are out chasing tumbleweeds
and you see one with multi-colored ribbons
flying in the wind
think of me
 
and give me a call
my number on the blue ribbons
452.5803
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
thank you Travis for the word bank...these words have inspired me to be silly
 
pioneer     clarity     witty     dramatic     chastened     symbol     imitation     sensitivity
 
             temperment     stage     peaceful     developed   splendor    
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMaples on November 3, 2010 03:15:39 PM Report
Oh, I LOVE this! I think one of the words in the word bank describe this perfectly....WITTY! Your imagination amazes me, how you are able to think up some of the things you write about, like the ribons in this poem attached to a tumbleweed, true delight!

 

Meg

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on September 29, 2009 09:50:08 AM Report
I love your creative talent. You express yourself so wonderfully. As you know I love wordbank poems you did this one like a star!
Yours .........................Fletch 

Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on September 20, 2009 08:22:06 PM Report
Hey She Whispers,

This is a job well done with the wordbank mister Travis gave to you!  A work which has us think of the meaning 'finding one's soul-mate' 
And me being a dreamer, a romantic person, could very much identify while enjoying the delight of a read i had myself!

Greetings: Peter
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 19, 2009 10:50:27 AM Report

Linda Jo:  well of course YOU would use COLOURED ribbons to get your message goin'!!!  This is so original -- you and Travis are so creative!!!!!


Lady D --- well I was curious where the dragons GOT this coloured ribbons


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 19, 2009 12:05:26 AM Report
Creative is the issue!! Great job...
Comment By: Freeb w mayer on September 18, 2009 11:01:34 PM Report
I think you really did a nice job with this one. I like it very much. Like the idea of a message in a bottle in the desert.




 


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