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Author Name: Freestormwolf 14 Comments
Date Added: September 23, 2009 04:09:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Night the Moon Fell

She saw it fall…
That lunar disc just dropped out of the
inky blue sky,
shattering in a field.
Running towards it
her heart almost stopped beating.
Crying in the still, white frost,
with trembling hands
she tried to piece it together...
But it was fractured
beyond repair.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 11, 2009 07:35:27 PM Report
this is a stunning write. vivid vivid vivid!
Jenny

Comment By: FreeSergio Ayotte on October 9, 2009 01:25:46 PM Report
What a visual fo words and images. You can actually feel yourself grieving for the shattered moon and then feel the compassion while trying to put it together. Brilliant!

 

Fondly, Sergio

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on September 29, 2009 11:19:46 PM Report
I like the voice in this.  It lets the reader in and relate to a personal experience. 
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 24, 2009 01:03:17 AM Report
it is truly inspiring...in stark reality, what would we do if the moon fell from the sky?
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 23, 2009 09:19:01 PM Report
Very stark imagery of loss, Ali...You have a voice all your own, kid...len
Comment By: TrialAnn on September 23, 2009 08:46:06 PM Report
This small poem speaks in a beautiful manner. Lovely.
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on September 23, 2009 12:59:54 PM Report
The olde moon....master of the night time sky. Sorry he broke her heart...sunshine follws the icey day. Have hope.

A moon lover myself, this is great writing Sis.

 

Sharon JJ

 

 

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on September 23, 2009 12:56:00 PM Report
What a brilliant poem Ali. You have captured the feelings of loss well.
Helen
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 23, 2009 10:49:49 AM Report
A million pieces scattered... can one fix it?? 
If its repairable  you can fix it dear lady..
 I love this a treasure for sure..

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on September 23, 2009 10:15:35 AM Report
This is great!
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 23, 2009 10:06:18 AM Report
Well, she's got a job ahead of her, but if it can be done, she's the one who'll do it. ML
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 23, 2009 09:05:45 AM Report
Absolutely chilling to me, little Healer....It is a gracious look at the world of the Lightworker....Indeed, a beautiful work, one that I shall keep...
In Light and Love...Margaret.....

Comment By: FreeLORETTA PITILLI on September 23, 2009 08:58:06 AM Report
The Moon's position sheds light on the interior life
of a person. And now she is left in darkness for the light is fractured beyond repair.   You so beautifully expressed her loss. with a touching  and delicate moment of grief.   Namaste,  Loretta

Comment By: FreeAdri on September 23, 2009 04:18:27 AM Report
Oh my!  What a poem, what a brilliant poem!  Ali this is something special. The tone is one of devastation
I love love love this!
Adri x





 


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