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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 4 Comments
Date Added: September 23, 2009 23:09:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Stepped Into Icy Water
Slipped a note within your blanket
Placed a kiss upon your cheek
Stepped back into the icy water
Prayed your life would be complete.
 
Observed the beauty of an angel
Caressed your fingers...tiny toes
Promised I'd be a bluebird on your shoulder
Kissed again your tiny nose.
 
Grieved...I only had a minute
Nursed you once upon my breast
Rocked and told you life's great story
Finding you would be my quest.
 
Searched more than a thousand faces
Thought I heard your voice upon the wind
Blushed and tearful...did I make the right decision?
Poured my heart out to my friend.
 
Stepped back out of the icy water
Adjusted the loving halo above your head
Greeted you with arms wide open
Tied again the golden thread.
 
Author's Notes:
I would like to thank Travis for these challenging words that grace this co-write.
 
a thousand faces      observed the beauty       quest        minute     caressed     slipped  
 
icy water         blushed           the loving halo          free to tell the _______ 
 
this is a true story that the word bank brought forth.  I never tire of telling it because it is one of life's rare Happy Endings....
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on October 20, 2009 08:40:09 PM Report
Thank goodness for a happy ending, Ljo~!  There is something about you, Metaphysically, that is unique....You gather the thoughts from the words as in Psychometry...Lovely write....

Margaret.....the Baglady readin' Ljo...

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 2, 2009 12:22:44 AM Report
A touching message indeed and I love happy endings! =)) As smooth as silk girlfriend...gud on ya!!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on September 24, 2009 11:25:00 PM Report
Wow Linda..this is great. I loved the way it flowed. You handled the challenge with ease...or at least thats how the poem feels. There is a bouncy swing to this write. I enjoyed the read.
Helen
Comment By: FreeS on September 24, 2009 10:23:31 PM Report
beautifully expressing .. this was a great read 




 


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