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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 10 Comments
Date Added: September 27, 2009 12:09:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Where the Blue Gentian Bloom
                                                               
Royal purple is the pigment of her dreams.
Dare she roam the valley
Where the blue gentian bloom?
Like the evening star
She heralds the night with her esprit...
Will she meet him again;
the horseman of her dreams
Who longs for sweet fellowship and a warm embrace.
 
A life interrupted like a sentence in midthought
Once an ice sculpture
Chiseled out by careless words
Meant to chip away at her integrity
She escaped the fire
With barely the smell of smoke and
 a few frayed ribbons
Hope rises from the ashes; 
like a mixture of fire and ice.
 
Just as certain as the mahogany chrysanthemum
appear in the autumn sun
Her eyes of chrysolite still shine
and see him standing at the garden gate...
where the blue gentian bloom.
 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on October 15, 2009 08:29:42 PM Report
I am truly carried away by your artistry. Well done. ML
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 5, 2009 05:48:13 PM Report
Just lovely wording, Linda....len
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 4, 2009 12:42:51 AM Report
this is beautiful, the imagry is astounding. Very creative and skillfully written!
JEN

Comment By: FreeHanane on October 3, 2009 10:48:46 AM Report
You are making of me a princess feeling as if I was a hero of an old tale, ha ha, each time I am a mermaid thanks to you Linda. Excellent writing deserving to go to my favourites and to remain as a memory for the shuddered soul.

 

Thanks

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 3, 2009 02:48:22 AM Report
absolutely lovely Linda You have excelled yourself here...and the purple font was perfect
Ali x
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on October 1, 2009 08:32:32 PM Report
Wow.  That second stanze is something.  I'm trying for a few good lines in my poetry and you just kept them coming in this poem....line after line. 
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 28, 2009 11:19:48 AM Report
You write with such grace and style this must be
about your loving heart....

Comment By: PremiumJillian K. Alexis on September 28, 2009 01:44:36 AM Report
Beautiful, well penned, what else can I say. The flow, imagery, and idea were all wonderful Linda Jo. I really enjoyed reading this marvelous write...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: PremiumMoon Fairy on September 27, 2009 09:49:30 PM Report
Beautiful imagery Linda Jo--I have to agree with Barbara,
she sums this write up perfectly.
Enjoyed every line.
~Tracie
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 27, 2009 12:29:18 PM Report
"Hope rises from the ashes"....yes indeed! Lovely expressions throughout--will she dare to go to the garden gate?

I really enjoyed this Linda...great penning that "shows" the reader exactly what you mean. "She escaped the fire

With barely the smell of smoke and

 a few frayed ribbons"...this is a great example of "showing". Beautiful!

 

~Barbara~





 


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