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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 6 Comments
Date Added: September 28, 2009 05:09:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Drift Away

I stand upon the sands of time

Holding a memory that isnít mine

Struggling to know what I should feel

Knowing that it wasnít real

 

I walk along the lonely shore

Wishing you had trusted more

A strong foundation we could have paved

The relationship we may have saved

 

I move down an empty street

Mind and body incomplete

Answers that Iíll never know

The seeds of doubt forever grow

 

I sit and wait for my salvation

To try and shake off this damnation

And find the strength to move along

Being right but feeling wrong

 

I watch the ocean form a swell

In my hand a little shell

 

I drop it gently in the seaÖ

 

And let it drift away from me
Author's Notes:
Just something that i'm going through right now
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 26, 2010 08:45:02 AM Report
words flow from the tip of your pen

going to my favs to read again

Comment By: FreeMelody on April 10, 2010 06:00:59 PM Report
Excellent rhyme and flow. Doubt what a horrible thing! It's the cancer of emotions, eats away till there is nothing left. Sad and wonderful write
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on November 4, 2009 03:09:45 AM Report
Awww, what a sad write - the two lines really got to me.

 

Hope you're ok :)

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on September 28, 2009 12:43:22 PM Report
I really enjoyed this read.
Comment By: FreeSavannah Ollar Jordan on September 28, 2009 11:22:29 AM Report
This is so well written.  I enjoyed reading it even tho' I could feel your sadness...keep up the writing and keep sharing it.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 28, 2009 09:40:08 AM Report

Beautifully written.  Hope things improve for you.


Lady D






 


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