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Author Name: ModeratorJillian Alexis 7 Comments
Date Added: September 28, 2009 21:09:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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SET ME FREE
In my mind's eye,
I see it now;
What once was lost,
has ne'er been found.
~
My dignity, once intact,
now, a scattered mess;
Pieces that are dead and gone,
I miss them, none the less.
~
"Who am I", I wonder,
no one answers me;
Am I invisible,
don't they hear my pleas?
~
I feel so all alone,
this world's too big for me;
Won't someone lend a hand,
and set this captive free?
 
 
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Once again, I've no idea where this one came from.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBrianna Burton on April 21, 2010 12:46:40 AM Report
Very deep. :-) I really enjoyed!
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on January 17, 2010 11:36:01 PM Report
the mind is the battle ground but in your heart you are free
Comment By: FreeLORETTA PITILLI on October 4, 2009 07:36:28 AM Report
Jillian,  we cannot go back and retrieve what was once there.we must move on creating ourselves every day.  some days it's hard others a breeze.  but nevertheless we must continue until we leave this earthly ground.  good write, loretta
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on September 29, 2009 12:53:11 PM Report
I like this poem.  I can really sense how you feel.  Well written.
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 28, 2009 10:35:59 PM Report
this might fall into the catagory of the topic of the week...helping hands...we might not always be the helper, extending a helping hand...at times we could be the recipient of much needed help...so we should not be afraid to ask for help...its a continuous give and take cycle...
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 28, 2009 10:14:56 PM Report
We all have changes in our life..
sometimes we have to let go of the past to have a future
Thank you for your comments..so kind to me...
... HUgs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on September 28, 2009 09:44:07 PM Report
A very interesting write.  You may be channeling feelings and then asking questions we all have.  




 


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