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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 7 Comments
Date Added: October 23, 2009 09:10:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Nightingale Sings
bottle nose dolphin, white tailed deer
ring tail lemur, collecting cheetah's tears
 
deer skin, seal skin, alligator hide
eel skin, shark fin, man and beast collide
 
coyote, buffalo, wild jungle cat
tiger stripes, monkey face, stolen habitat
 
rein deer, kill deer, gentle turtledove
can't you hear the warning from the One above
 
snake eyes, cow pies, kookaburra's laugh
change the hearts of hunters with your mighty staff
 
pheasant feathers, platypus, giant condor wings
hope its not too late... as the nightingale sings
 
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeken on October 11, 2012 10:44:08 PM Report
Very nice cadence enhanced by assonance and rhyme both intern and external.

strong mechanics to back a strong subject equals a great piece.



impressive!



ken


Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 2, 2010 12:33:06 PM Report
Thank goodness for groups and individuals that take action to save the species. Your words are rhythmic and your message is important. Very nice work Linda!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 25, 2009 03:39:49 PM Report
Once, we needed skins to stay warm..Once, whale oil was need for lamps and candles.. Without need, killing is just evil...len
Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on October 24, 2009 08:19:24 PM Report
Hello Linda,

The concern for nature was expressed with a beautiful use of words which made for a thoughtful and smoothly reading work of wonder!  Loved it!

Greetings: Peter
Comment By: Freepaul holmes on October 24, 2009 11:41:24 AM Report
...and they are just a few of the many that are on the brink of extinction. Good thought provoking piece.
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 23, 2009 04:53:17 PM Report
I hunted bear with dogs just once for trophy.  Never again.  It left a horrible taste in my soul.  Hunting for food, yes.  Trophy no.  For food it is no worse than killing pigs, cows, chickens, pheasants, fish, Canadian geese or any other animal God gave us to eat.  Hunting with dogs ... no.  No sport in that.  I haven't hunted in better than 20 years, but still love to shoot.    Good poem ... makes people think about what they are doing to this earth.     Gene

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 23, 2009 09:29:06 AM Report

Linda Jo:  beautifully written and too too true. 


Lady D






 


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