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Author Name: Freerainbowchaser 8 Comments
Date Added: October 28, 2009 03:10:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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something into nothing
 
sweet somethings whispered
in late night sessions
when love was new
we made confessions
 
sweet nothings mumbled
are now rote professions
as love grows old
we make concessions
Author's Notes:

a little rusty

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAndrew on November 23, 2009 11:58:19 AM Report
wish i could be that rusty....a great example of less being more
Comment By: FreeA.P. on November 19, 2009 05:41:08 PM Report
love the alliterative sounds all throughout this...this reads as a great contemplative piece, love the juxtaposition of feeling so concretely expressed...nicely done!
Comment By: FreeSteve on October 31, 2009 03:16:58 PM Report
Reality is one of the legs love should stand on along with Trust, Understanding, and being Faithfull 
Comment By: Freeb w mayer on October 28, 2009 11:03:48 AM Report
Maybe a bit rusty but still full of great potential. Wonderful images of how things change with age. Keep at it!!
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 28, 2009 10:22:00 AM Report

Amy:  I LIKE..........so very true though.


Lady Dragonwyck  


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on October 28, 2009 08:07:16 AM Report
Amy you cover alot of ground here...each verse says alot...nice progression!
Comment By: FreeAdri on October 28, 2009 05:32:26 AM Report
Stunning Amy!!!!!!!  Glad to see a post of you on here again! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeMaya on October 28, 2009 04:16:53 AM Report
I see a little humor in this because the 2nd verse really resonates ..rusty.

enjoyed this bittersweet read.

 





 


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