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Author Name: ModeratorJillian Alexis 6 Comments
Date Added: November 12, 2009 05:11:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~NIGHT~
I said goodbye
to myself today;
Layed down my dignity,
and walked away.
~
I packed my bags,
and left my home;
I've never felt,
so all alone.
~
I drove for miles,
"til the Sun went down;
Then I sat and cried,
yet made no sound.
~
That Motel room,
was dark and cold;
It was like me,
used and old.
 
 
 

 

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 27, 2009 02:04:36 AM Report
A powerful piece Jillian and one that a lot will be able to identify with personally I should think, you have brought the words to life what writing is all about a pleasure to read~Graham.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on November 16, 2009 02:20:21 PM Report
wow - this is a heart-breaker.  certainly hope it's creative license instead of life experience.  your last stanza really floored me - a true hard-hitter. 
Comment By: FreeElla on November 12, 2009 06:40:34 PM Report
oh... this hurts. as it should, to be this great poem..
Comment By: FreeAngelface on November 12, 2009 10:56:21 AM Report
Jillian,

 

My heart pours out for you! This poem reminds me of how I've been feeling aloy lately! All alone!! There's nothing more, painful. You did so well with this write! I pray you know that you are never alone! If you ever need a place to go..My home is always welcomed to you!

 

Love ya girl!

Angelface

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 12, 2009 09:42:45 AM Report
Such sadness in your heart...hope its just a poem...
 I have missed you....

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on November 12, 2009 06:44:40 AM Report
I hope this is simply a poem.  It's so sad.  Being alone is not fun.  I've never been the one to leave, but know the empty feelings.
Gene




 


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