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Comment By: b w mayer on November 25, 2009 08:32:16 PM |
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Wonderful!!!!
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Comment By: Barbara Demasson on November 21, 2009 02:39:27 PM |
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Would "hiding" work better? Is it me or is line 2 short one syllable? Lovely thought... truth in every word.
~Barbara~
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Comment By: Joe Petro on November 21, 2009 02:54:48 AM |
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Personally, I've never believed in the Man In The Moon...........I see a beautiful woman who features become a bit distorted due to atmospheric conditions. Or possibly due to a bit of Vino. Anyway, I enjoyed all of the visuals that these few lines conjured up. jp
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Comment By: She Whispers on November 20, 2009 07:00:27 PM |
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Oh, that ole devil moon always changing...
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Comment By: Tanya Harrison on November 20, 2009 11:23:40 AM |
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Linda Jo, you know I love this haiku too many ways. Thanks for sharing such a meaningful poem, sister.
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Comment By: Andrew on November 20, 2009 11:04:23 AM |
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i'm loving your haikus - you say so much in so little - damn that mysterious moon!
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Comment By: The Bag Lady on November 20, 2009 10:23:50 AM |
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Ahhh, again that mysterious Moon.....Ljo, please bundle your Haikus into a fine book to be published...They are always a reflection of your talented thoughts....Loved this...(((Love stuff about the Moon))) ..Margaret......a Baglady, seein' the man in the moon
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Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on November 20, 2009 08:58:05 AM |
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Linda Jo: you surely have captured the "hide and seek" of Mr Moon
Lady D
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