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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 8 Comments
Date Added: November 20, 2009 08:11:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Faces
 
 
 
changing his faces
he hides behind silken clouds
mysterious moon
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Comment By: Freeb w mayer on November 25, 2009 08:32:16 PM Report
Wonderful!!!!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 21, 2009 02:39:27 PM Report
Would "hiding" work better? Is it me or is line 2 short one syllable? Lovely thought... truth in every word.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on November 21, 2009 02:54:48 AM Report
Personally, I've never believed in the Man In The Moon...........I see a beautiful woman who features become a bit distorted due to atmospheric conditions. Or possibly due to a bit of Vino. Anyway, I enjoyed all of the visuals that these few lines conjured up. jp
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 20, 2009 07:00:27 PM Report
Oh, that ole devil moon always changing...
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on November 20, 2009 11:23:40 AM Report
Linda Jo, you know I love this haiku too many ways.  Thanks for sharing such a meaningful poem, sister.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on November 20, 2009 11:04:23 AM Report
i'm loving your haikus - you say so much in so little - damn that mysterious moon!
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 20, 2009 10:23:50 AM Report
Ahhh, again that mysterious Moon.....Ljo, please bundle your Haikus into a fine book to be published...They are always a reflection of your talented thoughts....Loved this...(((Love stuff about the Moon)))
..Margaret......a Baglady, seein' the man in the moon

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 20, 2009 08:58:05 AM Report

Linda Jo:  you surely have captured the "hide and seek" of Mr Moon


Lady D






 


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