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Author Name: ModeratorJillian Alexis 3 Comments
Date Added: December 20, 2009 22:12:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Satan came to Jesus,
not too long ago;
You see, the Devil hated Him,
t'was Satan's biggest foe.
He dared to speak to Jesus,
the Devil's greatest fear;
But Lucifer's stupidity,
has always been quite clear.
He tried to make a bargain,
with the One as white as snow;
"If I can dissuade one, great Saint,
will you let my Demons go"?
In all His splendid Glory,
He said, "Hmm, let me think;
If I accept your challenge,
will you leave my people be"?
"Of course I will", he lied,
he was sure he'd win the bet;
But Jesus was much smarter,
less Satan did forget.
So on his merry way,
Beelzebub did go;
Until he found a Saint,
then whispered, "Don't you know?
Jesus isn't who He claims,
He is a fake, a fraud;
You're wasting your time praying",
his breath, a pungent fog.
"Have you ever seen the Christ",
he slyly questioned him;
"He's just a normal person,
He did not wear your sins.
Forget about this Jesus,
cause he's forgotten you;
Have you ever seen a miracle,
now tell the honest truth.
Has he ever shown himself,
what has He done for you";
Satan was relentless,
"You haven't got a clue.
A hard question to answer,
'cause there isn't anything;
Which deems Him Son of God,
or proves Him King of Kings."
The Saint had had enough,
as he stood and faced the Beast;
"Get thee behind me Satan,
you slimy, evil thing.
 I know you know God's Word,
'cause you twist it everyday;
Now eat these words you dirtbag,
digest them all the way.
I'll tell you how I know,
that Jesus is the Truth;
God says so in His book,
for me, that is the proof.
Now dude, it's time to go,
but remember this one thing;
Jesus is the Son of God,"
and that's when Satan screamed.
"Follow me and you'll ne'er want,
 another single thing;
I can give you what He can't,
Eternity with me.
You'll never have to worry,
about sins or defeat;
Because where I come from,
rules are obsolete.
You can commit Adultery,
and nobody will know;
You'll have your choice of women,
come on with me, let's go.
If you don't like somebody,
and they have done you wrong;
You can end their life,
say to their soul's, "So long".
"You'll never get my Soul,
you, the lord of flies;
Now shut your mouth, you loser,
all that comes from it are lies."
And when he'd beaten Satan,
he then began to Pray;
The Lord smiled down upon him,
for keeping all His ways.
Now Jesus had been listening,
to each lie that was told;
He'd had enough of Satan,
His anger did unfold.
The Devil bowed his horn-clad head,
knowing he had lost;
He felt the stare from God's pure glare,
he knew the price this cost.
He would ne'er keep his word,
and Jesus knew this fact;
Yet the Saint had proven loyal,
he'd won the bargain pact.
"Let this be a lesson",
Jesus said to him;
"Don't mess with a great Saint,"
He warned with a slight grin.

Author's Notes:
I started writing this poem, and I just couldn't stop. Hence, it's as long as a novel. lol.
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 21, 2009 11:32:14 AM Report
AS always you reach out your way with such a amazing poem....
 I have missed you my poetic sister..
."Merry Christmas"
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on December 21, 2009 01:12:44 AM Report
May have been long, a novel, like it enough to read it as one. better than most i have read as of late, that's for sure! This was perfect.. Showed the belief you have and rightly so, on how good verses evil and who wins.. Loved the ending!!!


Moonie xx 

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on December 21, 2009 12:27:44 AM Report
It is a great Biblical theme that affirms your exemplary faith in Jesus Christ!


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