Today Is: Monday, October 21, 2019 10:21 AM. Our Topic of the Week: Quagmire
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: ModeratorJillian Alexis 6 Comments
Date Added: December 27, 2009 10:12:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 276
Total Views
Members: 21
Unique Members: 14
Guests: 896

Type: Unspecified
Category: General Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
~HOW DARE YOU~
 
Who are you to judge my work,
You are nothing but a jerk!
I've read some of the things you write,
and let me say, it's no delight!
~
You hypocrytical poet,
You're nothing but an, "I know it."
 Critiqing my work's fine with me,
It's the bashing that I disagree.
~
You think you're such a better person,
than what you are, that's for certain.
Yet your view of yourself's distorted,
Perhaps you drink, or smoke, or snort it?
~
What e'er your problem is with me,
I don't care, just leave me be!
You work so hard to cause me stife,
perhaps you'd better get a life!
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
Report Offensive Poem.

'~HOW DARE YOU~' Copyright © Jillian K. Alexis
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 18, 2010 02:24:45 PM Report
You go girl >>>>give them hell..so many smart asses in this world....
Comment By: FreeAmber P on December 28, 2009 03:48:25 AM Report
I hate know-it-alls, but I love your poem :]
Comment By: FreeAndrew on December 27, 2009 10:56:02 PM Report
you go girl - this site is based on collegial discussion and encouragement - nothing good comes of bashing.  besides, i don't think i'd want you pissed off at me!!!  ;-)
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on December 27, 2009 10:28:01 PM Report
Wow girl this was deep, and you brought it forth with a great wallop! Good for you!!!

I think other's, if they wish to say anything, say it nicely. if they can't do that, then move the heck on!!! I saw your writes. They are fab!

 

Go get em'....

 

Moonie xx

 

Comment By: FreeShane Ferguson on December 27, 2009 03:44:23 PM Report
When will people ever learn???
Insult a Lady, you'll surely Burn....

Nice post, I enjoyed every word of it...
Comment By: FreeAngelface on December 27, 2009 11:25:09 AM Report
Jillian, not sure who this is too! But want you to know that " Jesus love's you and your work and so do I!!! " You have been blessed with a gift,

( from God, as we all have been)! Not many use God's given gift to write christian poetry or to bring others to know the love of Christ . Some use it as the devils play pen to play on others feelings and emotions. To bring them down. God knows these people! I pray that who'ever this is, giving you such a hard time here, that they will seek to have a compassionate heart from Jesus Christ! And I pray this person will find away to ask forgiveness from you! Cause you have such a compassionate, loving heart.. one that has been through so much. God knows your heart, and He knows what you have been through. Other's have no idea. But God knows everything! ((( Hugs )))  You know I am here if ever you need me! I'm a friend who will always be true to you!

 

Love You, Girl!!

Angelface





 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 76
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday

Dan J. Mazurek (66)

 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

Creative-Poems.com
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2017 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.