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Author Name: FreeLadyDragonwyck 6 Comments
Date Added: January 04, 2010 19:01:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Storm

Right before the storm, I began to write

Wind is strong as leaves are blown by the wind

Strike lightning zig-zags the sky with each strike

Eyes wide as Sasha Cockatiel rolls eyes

Sasha Cockatiel  to me hops Sasha

Gently her bill rubs my cheek, gently

Thunder booms, Sasha sways, louder thunder

Storm's fury weakens, now a smaller storm

Sky goes from angry black to soft blue sky

Warm coffee mug a delight as hands warm

Pens handy on desk, Sasha rolls pens

More cups of  creamy coffee, I need more

Relax with Sasha after the storm, relax

Author's Notes:
For Ann's Poetry Calendar: 15 January 2010
Write a serpentine poem
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 8, 2010 04:38:56 PM Report
I don't know what a serpenite poem is, but I like cockateils...Had several..How's Trix, kid??
Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 7, 2010 12:43:11 PM Report
well, my poetry education continues - was previously unfamiliar with this style - but you've created a wonderful scene with your words and recharged my craving for some creamy coffee....
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 5, 2010 05:45:22 AM Report
You made a very good job of this Lady D I don't think I could write one of those.
Ali x
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on January 4, 2010 09:01:22 PM Report
well now this was a great response to the serpintine challenge.  Love the picture you left in my mind with the booming thunderstorm...and of course, the star of the show, Sasha!  She sounds like an adorable pet that provides alot of entertainment.
Comment By: TrialAnn on January 4, 2010 08:04:28 PM Report
Great job writing this poem where the first and last words of the lines are the same! Takes some effort doesn't it?
Comment By: ModeratorFoamy on January 4, 2010 07:12:54 PM Report
Another great poem written by the Lady D :)




 


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