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Author Name: FreeEkklesia 12 Comments
Date Added: January 16, 2010 18:01:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Dance where we Will - *Sonnet*
My love a testament to your beauty,
my devotion a wittness to your grace.
Such care is not perverted with desire,
I dare not invade your soveriegn soul
without permission of your royal lips.
Not your beauty but your virtue,
Not your allegro but your rhythm,
as we dance the reterate dance, we
tango with time, perfectly in balance.
What instrument and what musican
does play to keep us in steady motion?
bound by hand, step in-time with step;
born of spirit, we wonder with the wind.
Born of spirit, we dance where we will.
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on February 4, 2010 06:04:26 PM Report
"born of spirit, we wonder with the wind" - this just sounds beautiful when read aloud.  Lovely alliteration here.

A sonnet in "blank verse"  Nicely done without rhyme.
Nearly perfect meter as well.  

Congratulations on your award.  Loved this. ~Pamela
Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on January 31, 2010 10:28:51 PM Report
What can i say apart from Beautiful!

Oh£! and Congratulations on a worthy award too

Nik

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 31, 2010 10:25:06 PM Report
Congratulations! Stunning work! This is a well deserved award Thomas.

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on January 31, 2010 09:50:38 PM Report
oh, I am so happy to see that the Featured Poem Award rests on this piece.  Congratulations!  you have chosen virtue over beauty and rythm over allegro...perhaps a musical reference to living in the fast lane?  anyway loved the comparisons and the wise choices you made...quite a beauty you have here.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 31, 2010 08:01:48 PM Report
outstanding work, thomas - i'm in awe of those who can tell a wonderful story while working within the rules of the sonnet.  this award is well-deserved.
Comment By: FreesHeRi on January 31, 2010 07:18:14 PM Report
What a beautifully expressed poem-congrats on your award, it is much deserving of it!

Blessings-Sheri

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 31, 2010 06:45:29 PM Report
Thomas:  congratulations for the Feature Poem Award for this lovely sonnet.  Keep up the great posts.

 

Lady D --

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on January 18, 2010 12:21:56 PM Report
I wish I could write sonnets....I love them so much and this one is just wonderful. 
Excellent.
Going to my faves. 
~Cindy 

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 17, 2010 03:53:20 AM Report
Your writing gives one such pleasure and this sonnet is no exception they are indeed an art and one which you master so well~Graham.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 17, 2010 01:33:27 AM Report
What an enchanting sonnet Thomas...your expressions of devotions are as light as air with a rich, rewarding message that made me want to read the piece over again. Wonderful penning!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeJohn Armlovich on January 16, 2010 08:02:58 PM Report
ah, such beautiful work..... I like the idea of love being a dance.... great work
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 16, 2010 06:09:06 PM Report
Thomas:  This has very good flow and it is lovely.

 

Lady Dragonwyck





 


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