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Date Added: January 21, 2010 00:01:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Alone-A Heart Rewrite
Rewrite of Heart's classic song by the same name   Plot-A father grieves the loss of his only child   All I hear is the ticking of the clock As I lay here in the cold pitch dark I can hardly believe what you let happen tonight And through I want it so bad to go The pain lingers on so strong I can barely make it through Dying at the thought Your left our baby girl alone Alone   'Till now I never thought I would ever be angry enough To turn on one of my own I never dreamed I could learn to hate you And now it chills me to the bone How could you leave her alone How could you leave her alone   You don't know how badly this heart aches If only I could I just might squeeze your lily white throat Between my hands so tight  Yes, if I see you I might even do it tonight I could gladly in this moment Turn on one of my own Because you so carelessly left her alone Alone   Repeat chorus   How could you leave her alone How could you leave our little girl alone Alone All alone So cold So alone Alone   2010 Ramona Thompson    
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