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Author Name: FreeMarluxia 1 Comments
Date Added: February 02, 2010 15:02:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Pain
It hurts...
Almost like a consistent stabbing
Never ending, in constant misery
The pain will not stop

It cuts...
Almost like a sharpened scythe
Through each nerve, each vein
The pain will not stop

It aches...
Almost like a persistent migraine
Only across every inch of skin
The pain will not stop

This pain, this agony
Enough to bring hell to its knees
Perseverance will fail
A slow, inevitable death

It stings...
Almost like a thousand hornets
Nobody deserves such a punishment
But the pain will never stop...

Author's Notes:
Second piece of The Series. I'm glad I have found some inspiration to keep me going for a little longer however, I'm not entirely sure how long this will keep me going for when it's only a five-piece thing. I guess I'll find something else to work with afterwards.
I may be a little busy in the up-coming weeks so things may grind to a halt, but I will try to keep uploading work.
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Comment By: TrialAnn on February 2, 2010 07:50:34 PM Report
It's a good exercise for writing to keep the series going. There are plenty of venues for you to find as you work on your themes. Keep it up!


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