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Date Added: February 20, 2010 17:02:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Ann's Poetry Challenge~Where The Blue Gentian Bloom ll
Where the Blue Gentain Bloom
 
She waits...
For the sound of trampling hoofs
Dreams of royal purple fade to lavender
 
She waits...
For the echo of his distant voice
Like the evening star that holds all promises
Dare she roam the valley where the blue gentian bloom
She waits...will his esprit break the silence
Of desert nights
 
Once upon a time
He was the horseman of her dreams
A life interrupted like a sentence in midthought
Seperated by the crystal waves of the sea
Prison bonds stronger than Alcatraz
Keys as useless as velvet slippers
On the feet of a firewalker
Hopes rise from
the ashes
A mixture of fire and ice
 
She waits...
For Providence to open locked doors
Memories vivid as lavender sunsets fading to pink
Just as certain as the evening star that
Rises above Superstition Peak
Her eyes still shine
And imagine his tall shadow standing
At the garden gate...
 
Where the blue gentian bloom
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:

a challenge from Ann's Poetry Calendar Febr 8.  Write a poem in the Anaphora style.  This style uses deliberate repitition of a word or phrase at the beginning of several successive verses.

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Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on February 21, 2010 08:50:13 PM Report
Hello Linda Jo,

It has bin a while that i had the pleasure of reading you...  And now, reading you again, i was blessed receiving such a wealthy word's shower, a bath of poetry in which i felt most joyful to be in! 

Greetings: Peter
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 21, 2010 12:18:19 AM Report
That is nice, but way to often we wait for whomever to arrive when already they stand before us.   I believe the old cliche says, "Can't see the forest ... for the trees."  Dreaming is great, but don't lose contact with reality. ...... That coming from someone whose princess has already arrived in his life.  Maybe you will find your dream lover also.    Interesting style.  I wonder if my poem "Steelhead" would fall under that category.  The first stanzas repeat over and again, much like my boring day of fishing until I  got one on ... even when it spit the hook and smiled at me.
Very beautiful poetry
Gene
Comment By: TrialAnn on February 20, 2010 06:44:39 PM Report
Lovely poem. Good job on the style!

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 20, 2010 05:48:35 PM Report
Beautiful...so many things to appreciate here Linda. The waiting can be unbearable..."Hopes rise from the ashes A mixture of fire and ice"...awesome lines that hold a hint of promise. Well done!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 20, 2010 05:43:48 PM Report
Linda Jo:   this is so beautiful.  I am really pleased to see you participating in the Calendar.  GREAT write....

 

Lady D





 


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