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Author Name: Freejohncarter 3 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2010 10:03:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Permanence
Permanence
 
What permanence is this
In my daily grind
Heaven lent it's kiss
But eyes to me were blind
 
You could end this lifetime
In a single moment
I am naked to your thoughts
 
What restless spirit
Inside me bides
What permanence inside me
Hides
 
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Comment By: FreeAdri on March 15, 2010 06:55:52 AM Report
This is just gorgeous gorgeous!  I love the flow, the few words with the huge message and heart.  Just brilliant John, I love it
Adri x

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on March 14, 2010 08:51:27 PM Report
We are not permanent ... are we?
Scary.    Very well written with much said with a few well choosen words

Gene
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 14, 2010 07:48:57 PM Report
is there a war raging between the desire for permanence and that of being a free spirit?  a conflict with the wish for stability...and being carefree?  this appeals to my sometimes fickle nature...desiring change but wanting to keep my feet on solid ground.  you make us think.




 


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