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Author Name: Freerainbowchaser 5 Comments
Date Added: March 17, 2010 01:03:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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This Mother's Strings
Through years and years of highs and lows
To life's pane I pressed my nose
Always outside looking in
Children laughing to my chagrin

A faceless babe you were to me
A branch missing from my tree
I dreamed of you and hoped to find
The figment imagined in my mind

Then a night in June with weather bad
I shed the tears no longer sad
I held you close a babe with face
Into my heart a special place

Reality exceeded my fantasies
A child so bright and eager to please
Is who you are and have always been
After so many losses I'll take the win

Through years and years of highs and lows
I've made mistakes this mother knows
I'll cut the strings as you make your way
But please know my love so they won't fray.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeA.P. on June 28, 2010 05:52:20 PM Report
lovely delicate metaphors running rhythmically through this.
nicely expressed.
Comment By: FreeSteve on March 21, 2010 05:24:35 PM Report
A wonderful expression of what love is.   
Comment By: Freedean evans on March 17, 2010 01:12:06 PM Report
ahh the birth of a new baby we just had a baby boy in july .. 30 years after our last one lol but he's so special that we just know he was sent us by God.. and we are so Thankful for him... great poem of a Mother's love.. dino
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 17, 2010 10:18:50 AM Report
Very full of love and pride Amy
Ali x
Comment By: FreeAdri on March 17, 2010 07:17:38 AM Report
This is beautiful and heartfelt, as only you can.

Beautiful
Adri x





 


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