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Comment By: The Bag Lady on July 9, 2010 11:01:24 AM |
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My, my, Andrew....This was a labor of love~!! Such discipline within the work! I will try one of these,..((probably won't have the luck that you did))...I am so very proud to be the 26th, yes.....26th comment upon your work~!! CONGRATZ on the AWARD, my poetic friend~!! Aunt Margaret....readin' Andrew~!!
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Comment By: Barbara Demasson on June 9, 2010 01:32:44 AM |
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This is my favorite of all of your poems...LOVE IT! You have definitely earned this award fair and square...excellent penning Andrew. Wowowow...you have grown so much as a writer in such a short time...I'm thrilled to see the growth! Fine work!
~Barbara~ *plucking this beauty to keep as a favorite*
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Comment By: Kelli on April 22, 2010 04:13:55 PM |
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What a well deserved award Andrew! Great piece!
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Comment By: Tanya Harrison on April 17, 2010 02:16:47 PM |
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Congratulations Andrew! I loved your poem.
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Comment By: Cindy Bendel on April 14, 2010 02:16:25 PM |
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Congratulations on this wonderful penning! You rock! ~Cindy
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Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on April 14, 2010 09:10:00 AM |
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Well done, Andrew. An unique treatment of a common problem. Congratulations on the award. Always love seeing it go to the truly deserving. You have an excellent mentor. I've learned a lot from her. ML
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Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on April 14, 2010 06:22:20 AM |
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Congratulations on your award Andrew. You have written a very fine Retourne and as you can see, the proof is in the pudding. YAY. *hug* You are a star pupil. ~Pamela
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Comment By: Melody on April 12, 2010 11:18:10 AM |
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YAY Andrew :]]]]]]]] congrats
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Comment By: sHeRi on April 12, 2010 10:38:49 AM |
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I know this was a challenge for you since you mentioned that too me...which makes this award all so much more gratifying...I loved it the first time I read it now it holds it's value.
Congrats Andrew-you deserve it.
Sheri
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Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on April 12, 2010 09:14:31 AM |
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Andrew: Super Congratulations for the Feature Poem Award. Now you KNOW doing form poetry is a good thing.
Lady D
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Comment By: Jennifer on April 12, 2010 08:22:03 AM |
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a bil ol congrats is in order CONGRATS! you deserve this! JEN Your friend
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Comment By: Glata on April 12, 2010 07:31:42 AM |
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Well, congrats, Adnrew!
Glad indeed to see this award on your page! Very deserving!
Hugs...
Glata
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Comment By: Linda Jo on April 11, 2010 11:09:50 PM |
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well I might have entered a late comment ...but let me be the first to congratulate you on the Featured Award! you did a great job on the form as well as the content...if I could pick a new favorite line it would be, "regrets scream for soul-soothing salve". Congratulations, Andrew!
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Comment By: Hannah Mae on April 9, 2010 01:12:14 AM |
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The form reminds me a bit of a pantoum. I like it! It's interesting :D Thanks for sharing
~Shanna
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Comment By: Dan J. Mazurek on April 4, 2010 09:01:10 AM |
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very good andrew
It's going to my favorites to challenge me too
What a beginner like me looks forward to do.
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Comment By: Linda Jo on April 3, 2010 04:07:43 PM |
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well Andrew, here I am again...dragging along in last place but I really wanted to share my enthusiasm for this piece. It really echos your feelings of second chances and seeking redemption...regrets, remorse...and "a dormant conscience roaring to life"...(loved that line) so many good lines here...too many to count. Great form and style...I must try to write a retourne...but maybe i need some chocolate first...
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Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on April 1, 2010 10:39:53 AM |
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*smile* I like your clock line better too. Excellent.
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Comment By: Aminath Agleema on April 1, 2010 10:16:24 AM |
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powerful poem. It's awesome, great work.
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Comment By: Tanya Harrison on March 31, 2010 10:04:21 PM |
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Bravo! I loved this poem. Great job with the context, content, dealing with a new form of poem too!
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Comment By: Melody on March 31, 2010 08:49:51 PM |
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I love new forms and formats. And think you did an excellent job of this one. I haven't ventured out of my comfort zone yet :] but maybe your courage will inspire me :] Excelllent
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Comment By: HOPE on March 30, 2010 06:26:48 PM |
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Andrew This is wonderfully written and what a challenge. Superb job! Ms. Tina Dee
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Comment By: Jennifer on March 30, 2010 05:41:42 PM |
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WooooWeeee! There is a whole lotta hurt within these words. We all have demons. We all have pasts. It is important we Look forward and be positive . Andrew I get so excited in a kid kind of way every time I write a poem. "Specially one that is a challenge, such as this. I have a big ear to ear smile for you right now, "scept this poem, is sooo sad. See that just proves it is good poetry when you hit personal chords with your reader. And this hits a chord, if ya know what I mean? Well, Glad to viiew this post and You did a fine job on trying something New! Good challenge! Jen
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Comment By: sHeRi on March 30, 2010 03:10:07 PM |
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It is so hard to construct a normal free style poetry form but to do this is brave. You are so good with trying this various styles and mastering them effortlessly..Bravo
Sheri
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Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on March 30, 2010 12:28:07 PM |
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Andrew: lovely lovely -- I loved the last verse. This is an excellent retourne -- and YES Pamela is an excellent poetry form teacher.
Lady D
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