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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 28 Comments
Date Added: April 01, 2010 15:04:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Hearts' Chord
              

       The Hearts' Chord

 

Today I saw a ray of sunshine, 

  casting a shadow of my life line.

Its faith now holding the end of the rope,

  with love suspended by a thread of hope.

It was a young and splendid weave, 

  knit together with plans and dreams.  

 

Dreams and plans unravel with time,

  love alone is on the line.

Dreams like clouds keep circling the earth, 

  plans discarded are a drifting iceberg.

Don't know or understand why,

  for only love is on the line.

 
People's lives end in a field of lost dreams,

  planted monuments have replaced their plans.

For dreams like clouds just disappear,

  and forgotten plans no longer held dear.

Will faith, hope, and love finally intertwine?

  or the silent reaper behind me severs my line.

 

 Love like a dirigible is vanishing from sight,

  the zeppelin Hindenburg soaring last flight?

Time with the winds of doubt are in a race,

 hearts chords weaken by the marathon pace.

Wondering if my life line will finally break, 

  sending love forever to its celestial grave. 

 

 When I was young I knelt to my knees,

  for love on a hill called Mount Calvary.

It always takes faith I need to believe, 

  in someone superior then plans and dreams.

His word says He died for all mankind,

 God’s perfect love for all on the line.

 

How much longer must I carry this cross?

Have I underestimated faith over my loss?

Save love now drive the nails thru my hands.

God's way to reveal love can I use his plan?

He loves the whole world me only one.

Can’t crucify true love it will never run.

 

God commissioned man to pen these words;

  “Faith, hope, and love will forever endure.”

My love for you will never die,

  with hope and faith a heavenly twine. 

 I know now and understand why,

  my love for you was never on the line.

 

 

Author's Notes:
love is a powerful force that moves the poets pen.  Just love gets misconstrued at times at the level of humans application. change the font even hard on my eyes
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Comment By: FreeWide Awake on March 12, 2011 05:10:58 PM Report


Dan




 

It IS a struggle to fight the good fight and run the good race…the marathon…and continue to grow in love.



It’s even hard to just maintain the love we have sometimes!



But if we DO endure in love till the end, there will be awesome reward at the end of it all.



We both know that the Lord makes all things possible for us…prayer and supplication are our constant and reliable source of strength…If we pray for it, He will make us to endure, He will grant us the love and faith needed…Praise His wonderful compassion and generosity!



This is a very lovely weave, Dan…IT IS WAXING POETIC!!! :o)






In Christ Jesus~



Pamela





Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 12, 2010 10:25:26 PM Report
CONGRATULATIONS, Dan~!!  Oh, I know it is late, but I just found this gem upon your library shelf and wanted to say that it is such a pleasure to have read this work~!!...It was truly awesome, my friend....

Margaret...reading Mazurek.....

Comment By: FreeSteve on May 19, 2010 07:03:26 PM Report
Very well written and deserving of an award.
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on April 26, 2010 11:49:23 PM Report
First, Congratulations on receiving the award. Truly, a beautiful piece, in both skill and inspiration. I have found, no matter what life throws my way, the bottom line is always the same....His love sustains me. Thank you for the blessing of this poem Dan. 

But by the grace of God,
~Cindy 

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 26, 2010 08:46:49 PM Report
Dan your About is nearly as powerful as the write itself, and I agree...Love does get misconstrued...
Congrats on the award...Well deserved!
Enjoyed this...
Glata

Comment By: Freemandate on April 26, 2010 06:41:36 PM Report
What a wondeful way to express your love. I really liked the last two stanzas and especially the line:

"Can’t crucify true love it will never run".

 

Manny

Comment By: ModeratorFoamy on April 26, 2010 03:35:22 PM Report
What a great write.  Just like the rest of your things I have had the chance to read.
Comment By: Freealisha on April 25, 2010 08:32:27 AM Report
very emotional and heart felt... CONGRATULATIONS! for the award, this poem earned it...
Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on April 23, 2010 12:22:49 PM Report

Dan your poem is terrific, I can understand with no doubt in my mind why it won an award! Keep up the good work! It's POETs like you that inspire me to continue writing.                                                                               


                                                                                                                                                 Dr. Jay


Comment By: FreeAdri on April 22, 2010 04:24:11 PM Report
This is a beautiful piece, strikes a cord with the reader and pulls you into this cascade.
Really special, and well worth the award. Congratulation.
Adri x 

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on April 20, 2010 10:19:00 PM Report
Hauntingly beautiful Dan!  This is a timeless piece that can weather any storm.  Simply amazing.  Congratulations on an award well deserved...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on April 19, 2010 12:12:38 AM Report
Your poem struck a deep chord in my heart.  Our love doesn't die once the physical body has passed or our romantic love has passed too.  Grieving is the most painful thing to do.  That's what makes your poem so beautiful, you captured and expressed those feelings perfectly Dan.  Bravo! Congratulations on winning the Feature Award for this poem.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 18, 2010 09:07:35 PM Report
Congratulations, Dan - great to see your work recognized, but it's no surprise to me!  this is a wonderful work and the award is richly deserved.
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on April 18, 2010 08:30:55 PM Report
Just beautiful, Congratulations!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreesHeRi on April 18, 2010 07:59:19 PM Report
Congrats Dan..I loved this piece and not shocked at all that it won.

 

Bravo

Comment By: FreeMelody on April 18, 2010 06:52:57 PM Report
Congratulations :]]]]]]]] I love when a favorite poet gets his recognition :]
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 18, 2010 06:05:23 PM Report
Dan:  super congratulations on the Feature Poem Award for this write.  Keep up the good work.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 18, 2010 05:59:50 PM Report
Dan, dont know how i missed this loving and inspirational piece the first time...but glad to have another chance to read and comment.  Congratulations on your Featured Poem award...great questions asked of the reader...is love on the line? and "Will faith, hope, and love finally entertwine?"  I appreciate the last stanza with all the answers...especially, "my love for you was never on the line"...the whole piece held together with skill and ...heavenly twine.  great job!
Comment By: FreesHeRi on April 8, 2010 08:09:51 AM Report
Dan I understand about faith, love and dreams. This was wonderful...the meter, rhyme and premise is superb. I will keep tuned in-

I believe before the heart is the work of God you mentioned..the more you love the more he focuses on you and in turn awards us such honorable talents like guiding your pen to these words..HE uses our mouths/hands to speak his word!

Sheri

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 7, 2010 06:42:56 PM Report
Dan, I see so many others love this heart felt poem as much as I did.. I just had to come back to you and say its as beautiful as a Spring day with flowers in the breeze...
You could steal any womans heart with your love poems....
.I hope you write again real soon....
 I await....

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 6, 2010 08:52:42 PM Report
Dan:  this is a very indepth write.  Truly your heart is very full of love and this write demonstrates that. 

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAngelface on April 4, 2010 11:27:19 PM Report
Love is truly an amazing feeling, when loved by that special someone! And more special when shared in the moment of taking the time to do things together.Like going to the beach, or yet by meeting on that special little river called fairbanks,in Alaska.. I heard there is a water fall there that is absolutely gorgous.. should really check that out someday with the love of your life!! This poem, is truly a prime example of what true love really means. Lots of people do not know how to truly love, such a sad, sad world we live in today! If ever you have the time, Id like to write another poem with you,my ever lasting friend! Sharing words of love with you would be like a blessing allof its own. For you write with such a way, that leaves the eyes wanting to read more, and the heart aching for more to come!!!  Keep up the wonderful work!

 

Angelface

Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 4, 2010 02:57:08 PM Report
Dan, I admire the range of definitions of love you bring together into this one work - it shows a tremendous amount of thought and effort devoted by the author.  "Dreams like clouds keep circling the earth, plans discarded are a drifting iceberg..." - powerful and very true.  great work
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on April 3, 2010 09:07:51 AM Report
What a Very beautful poem...So, wonderfully pen..Excellent work!!

Angel

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on April 2, 2010 11:10:24 AM Report
Just an amazing poem, I really liked the rhythm and and pace.  It just seem to flow so easily from your pen.
Tina

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 2, 2010 09:59:33 AM Report
My goodness what does one say after reading this very beautiful heart felt poem I am at a loss for words...
 You express yourself so well.... 
I must print this and read again at work...
... its just amazing....I feel so blessed...

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 2, 2010 05:06:13 AM Report
Wonderful piece here Dan. I so loved every single line in this. Your imagery was fantastic. felt throughout.. Yet let me say this, your last stanza on this. Wow! That hit me hard.. It was overpowering in its intensity.. Well done on this one my friend.

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeMelody on April 1, 2010 03:53:13 PM Report
Love lives in the heart of poets, flowing to the tips of the fingers, transforming into  verse

This was just beautiful, emotions stirred by words from a talented poet. Excellent piece





 


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