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Date Added: April 02, 2010 02:04:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Winter Never Ends...Showcasing Our Young Authors
cobwebs and deadly spiders, crawling
when will it end
pain stains my skin
stupidity takes control
motivating sin after sin
an arctic winter, howling
there's ice on the ground
It's always the same
the frost's on the inside
and your heart's filled with rain
my hollow heart of ice, screaming
why do I scream
plead for the past
on my knees I pray
hoping this won't last
dark resentment with wings, soaring
my heartz a burnt whole
insane...ashamed, enslaved
while I drown in the darkness
my hunger is restless
I breathe in the stench of decay, gasping
what have I become
what's in a name
when clouds are crying
drowning me in shame
Malicious thoughts, sprouting
seventy three winters landed on my head
we are the forgotten men
quiet and vapid,
our lamentations, silent sorrows
no tears to weep
my hollow screaming heart
freezing cold to the touch
like shining diamonds
the cold's on the inside
staring out at the rain
and there's ice on the ground
it's always the same
skull knocking against my shoulders
spiderweb hands
as each day shrinks past
I am anything but alone
these shivers remind me of you
tears of longing freely flow from my eyes
snow keeps falling
when winter never ends
 
Ellie Girl,
Kerina Skye,
Lilly Taylor,
Melody, Raspberry Ice Nymph,
John January, JRocKK,
Thomas Heath, Ekklesia
Mahalarose
Author's Notes:
I have woven together the words from some of our talented young poets.  I wish to showcase their work this week and  I have found a theme that flows like a dream. Their lines are color coded and their names are listed in the order in which they appear.  I wish to thank our talented young poets who supplied the lines for this tapestry:  Ellie Girl, Kerina Sky, Lilly Taylor, Melody, JRocKK, Ekklesia., and Mahalarose.  I can hear your words echo back and forth.  You are all very talented...creative, dramatic, and intense.  Individually you shine...together you sing!
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJess Dixon on April 3, 2010 04:49:23 AM Report
I love this! Thank you for using my work, and thank you everybody for the nice comments.

 

Please check out my other work if you like the snippet you see here.

 

Jess/Lilly

x

Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 2, 2010 04:46:42 PM Report
you've collected a mt rushmore of young talent here, linda jo - don't know them all, know most of them.  and kudos to you for pulling bits of their work into a memorable piece that is totally entertaining and thought provoking. 
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 2, 2010 12:31:06 PM Report
Linda Jo:  what a wonderful way to encourage and thank our younger writers.  This is great -- thank you for taking the time and patience to do this.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeMelody on April 2, 2010 11:06:13 AM Report
You are such an amazing person. Not only is this so well put together but so very sweet. It's people like you that give us newbies encouragment and inspiration. Originial and creative, thank you so much .

*hugs*

Comment By: FreeJohn January on April 2, 2010 10:11:08 AM Report
Inkredible >> the way it iz beautifully sewn 2gether...iluv this
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on April 2, 2010 04:17:38 AM Report
This is just amazing  I really like it Linda Jo. If  you read it a load to yourself it has just a perfect rhythm. I have read this poems and they are all great poems in themselves.  Tina
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 2, 2010 03:11:14 AM Report
Wow.. This was intense Linda Jo! I am stunned at the artistry in these words and how you brought it all together.. Genius!!!! Okay tears.. They are so talented. All of them! And their words have brought forth such wonder to this page.. Bravo to this and them!

 

Moonie xx 

Comment By: FreeMichelle on April 2, 2010 03:07:59 AM Report
OMG! This is sooooo ur best poem ever!!! So going in my faves!!!!!




 


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