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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 34 Comments
Date Added: May 09, 2011 23:05:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Please allow me to introduce myself..
'Sunrise Over the Everglades'
 
Please allow me to introduce myself
I am beauty to behold when all is lost 
To feast your eyes upon, gaze in wonder 
In the dusk of night, I come forth.
 
Can you Feel me?
Can you See me?
I ask in my softest whisper.
 
Close your eyes and gently dream
Breathe deeply my sweet scent
Feel my soft breeze, as it passes your face
Gently ruffling your hair
Your skin, as my touch leaves its trace.
 
I sit in wait for all to be still
The ending of the day to finally come
Of all ones worries just tossed aside
Yes... Gently they glide
Across my wind
In my hand of breeze.
 
Toss them, I beg
Give to me, all
For behold my beauty
Hear my soothing call.
 
In the dusk of the night I call you
My red hues of color beaming bright
Distant,I may be, yet near
Just up above you, my brilliant sight.

Ahhh yes...

I shall never leave you, I so promise
Will stand by your side till the end of time
Together we will wander, you and I
The walks that life always leave behind.
 
Stare into my beauty, my friend
The dreams that you alone share
Send forth above with fevered whisper
For this I promise, I shall always be near.
 
Yes.....
 
Please allow me to introduce myself
I've been around for the longest of times
Just rest your weary eyes upon me
And listen to my wind as it softly chimes.
 
And I shall carry you upon my golden slumber
Hold you close in my dusk filled nights
Cherish your promises you throw towards me
Gently sooth your fears of fright.
 
So..

Please allow me to introduce myself..

My name;
Just call me 'The ending of the night'
Author's Notes:
"Sunrise Over the Everglades"
Courtesy of NOAA.  Photographer:  Richard Frear
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDean on June 21, 2018 11:22:31 PM Report

What a pleasure to have met you, and what an amazing way of getting to know you . . .

I wanna stare into your beauty forever and ever . . .

One can dance the night away reading this beauty to get to know you "The ending of the night"

Immensely enjoyed it

~Dean

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on October 15, 2013 08:53:13 AM Report

An amazing work of art here, a Renoir for the senses, a true labour of love, as only you could produce. I'm so glad I came I came across this. You truly are StellaLuna, shining brighter than the stars and the moon! <3

 

Len

Comment By: Freeguest_writer on March 9, 2013 08:24:28 PM Report
brilliant and beautifully written!
Comment By: FreeFilthy on November 17, 2011 07:53:07 AM Report
Deserved the award up there Monnie.


Comment By: FreeKarl Berry on August 22, 2011 04:07:13 PM Report


I am slow but i made it ...


good work in-deed!......


patch.....!

Comment By: FreeStar on June 21, 2011 07:06:53 PM Report


Moonie,


 


This is simply beautiful! So deserving of an award!


 


Stari

Comment By: FreeBRUCE MARTONE on May 22, 2011 12:50:13 AM Report


WELL DONE !


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 16, 2011 06:35:33 PM Report
This is stunningly beautiful, Moonie...The images you put in my mind are wonderful...Great writing, kid....len
Comment By: FreeRobert on May 10, 2011 05:08:04 PM Report
Breathtaking this such a soothing poem almost a lulluby  like LJ I am ready to be carried on your golden cloud of slumber perhaps then I could find contentment
Comment By: FreeSteve on May 10, 2011 04:08:00 PM Report

This is very well written and deserving of an award.


Comment By: FreeMichelle on September 6, 2010 05:53:33 PM Report
This is a beautiful and calming piece, and totally deserving of the award. This poem is full of astounding imagery. :) Congratulations!

 

~*Shell*~

Comment By: FreeMichelle on June 14, 2010 05:14:19 PM Report
Enchanting and beautiful write! It brings a sense of calm and rest. Loved it :)

 

Hugs

Shell

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on May 27, 2010 10:27:05 PM Report
Congratulations!  and that is why it is a winner hands down...nobody could have said it better!  oh yes, I am ready to be "carried upon your golden slumber"  and "have my fears soothed of fright"   by the ending of the night....ahhhh!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 27, 2010 01:31:53 AM Report
Congratulations Moonie...such a splendid mood was created in this piece!

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: Freemandate on May 26, 2010 08:08:56 PM Report
Moonie,

 

Breahtaking!!! Congrats.

 

Manny

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on May 26, 2010 08:35:40 AM Report
This was such a stunning poem Moonie, you really deserved this award for writing such a beautiful piece. Congratulations to you .  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on May 24, 2010 02:05:01 PM Report
Moonie Congratulations!  I loved this poem.  You deserved this award. I'm so happy for you.  Your poetry is always beautiful!
Comment By: FreeAndrew on May 24, 2010 11:39:45 AM Report
Why am I not surprised to see this outstanding work recognized!!  Congratulations, my dear friend, on this award.  A great work earning great recognition --- beautiful thoughts from a truly exceptional poet. 
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on May 24, 2010 11:29:17 AM Report
A*w*e*s*o*m*e, dear Lady of the Moon~!!  I'm tickled pink that you brought this masterpiece into the Award Category~!!  Loved it from start to finish.......Beautiful~!!Congratz....

Margaret....the Baglady

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 24, 2010 11:26:10 AM Report
A huge and happy and hearty congrats! This is SOOOO deserving of the award! You, me gal, are in beautiful company with the Baglady in the winner's circle! Congrats, and I'm so happy to see such a deserving write win!

Love ya me gal!

Glata, happy as a clam for ya~!

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 23, 2010 07:18:58 PM Report
Moonie:  Super congratulations for the Feature Poem Award for this marvelous write.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on May 3, 2010 10:17:27 PM Report
Oh wow. The imagery carries one along as smoothly as a gently rocking hammock on a summer evening, and the ending was a beautiful surprise.

 

Beautifully done, MoonStar!

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 18, 2010 11:40:46 PM Report
You always write your best and you love for life does all the rest.... Breathlesssssssss
Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 18, 2010 11:01:52 PM Report
all I can say is mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm good!
Comment By: FreesHeRi on April 18, 2010 08:09:26 PM Report
Moonie-This was amazing..I am in awe. So tranquil and soothing and how you compared your self to the finest dispaly of nature is just fabulous. To my fav's. I was swept away by your words, for you couldn't have created a more beautiful place to be.

 

Sheri

(((HUGS)))

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 18, 2010 06:03:16 PM Report
This is, by far, one of the best pieces of yours I've read!~ Absolute beauty, me gal! You have a talent that surpasses any I've seen in many a year!
Loved this!
Huggers to ya!~
Glata

Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 18, 2010 05:27:43 PM Report
Great piece of work Moonie.  Damon
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 16, 2010 07:54:25 PM Report
the moon (MoonStar) it seems has changed places with the sun...I feel this is your reflection...you capture the daylight as well as the night with your wonderful/ colorful words. I doubt that anyone could have said it better!! ♥
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on April 16, 2010 06:59:59 PM Report
A wonderful poem and beautiful images.
Tina

Comment By: FreeMichelle on April 16, 2010 12:24:04 PM Report
Wow! I love this! A what a beautiful display fit for it! I'm putting this in my faves!
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on April 16, 2010 08:29:50 AM Report
This was just as soft and soothing as a lover's kiss Moonie, you amaze me with your powers of description. Absolutely stunning!  Hugs,  Henry
Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 16, 2010 08:11:32 AM Report
Your work has the same opening line of the Rolling Stones' "Sympathy for the Devil," but I like yours a lot better - couldn't be more different.  You've masterfully personified the end of the night, giving it human attributes and qualities that are warm and embracing - inspiring us to want to see that end of the night with someone very special....

BRAVO ZULU, lovely lunar lady

Comment By: FreeAngelface on April 16, 2010 08:07:25 AM Report
Mom I really love the beauty of this poem! It's soothing course of words leaves me peaceful thoughts of the beauty of this world!!! I love it very much!!! HUGS
Comment By: FreeMelody on April 16, 2010 06:44:51 AM Report
This might be the best poem I have ever read. Flowing with beautiful imagery. Very creative, well I guess I just really like it, no sense trying to point out all the good things :] It's all wonderful.




 


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