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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: April 16, 2010 07:04:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Within
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Just like a voice
Passing through time
The love i burried
I exhumed in rhyme.
The words interred
Deferred
My ever latent moon
Angels break my heart
So late this afternoon.
Fill me with light
Before the night rushes in
Complete this crescendo
That holds me within.
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Comment By: FreeSteve on June 19, 2010 12:49:01 PM Report

Each of your words shine like stars in a deep blue night.     


Comment By: PremiumJillian K. Alexis on May 1, 2010 07:16:56 AM Report
Very nice poem John.  And they say romance is dead...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeMelody on April 16, 2010 08:37:04 AM Report
Very beautiful and tender. I liked the layout of this poem, it wasn't a carbon copy of another. You are versitle and each poem enjoyable
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 16, 2010 07:43:27 AM Report
Just beautiful how you write with your style
with so much emotion for the lovely lady..
another one of your best...

Comment By: FreeAdri on April 16, 2010 07:38:42 AM Report
I like the new rhythm pattern you are using in your latest work. It give a ambiance to the poem, a linger note that is still waiting to be uttered. A wonderful rendition and a lovely write.
Adri x





 


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