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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 10 Comments
Date Added: May 02, 2010 16:05:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Heart Beats

Your heart is ready to forgive.
Your heart is often to blame.
Your heart is willing to give.
Your heart is hard to tame.

Your heart is tired of games.
Your heart is an Olympic torch.
Your heart is hot with flames.
Your heart is often scorched.

Your heart is set in stone.
Your heart cannot forget.
Your heart lies down alone.
Your heart sleeps with regret.

Your heart is buried in sand.
Your heart says 9-1-1 call.
Your heart breathes again.
Your heart expose to all.

Your heart beats to share.
Your heart races for repair.
Your heart desires to care.

Your heart repeats a prayer.

Your heart is in love again.
Your heart is not a pup.
Your heart runs from a chain.
Your heart begs with a cup.

Your heart is out of control.
Your heart accepts a dare.
Your heart sells its soul.
Your heart left with despair.

Your heart is turned away.
Your heart says Im insane.
Your heart is now betrayed.
Your heart you cant contain.

Your heart needs pain relief.
Your heart had breach a wall.
Your heart is a diamond point.
Your heart has inscribed its fall.

Your heart is a firing squad.
His heart was pierced by you.
Your heart is released to God.
Your heart is returned brand-new.

Your heart paces the sidelines.
Your heart is back on the field.
Your heart follows His guidelines.
Your heart is completely healed.

 

Your heart is an experiment.

Your heart has passed the test.

Your heart has met perfection.

Your heart forgives the rest.

Author's Notes:
Said to myself I would take a break from writing for a while.
The words parading by said: "Don't ever change the dial."
Note had to fix a couple of typos. sorry put some hyphens on the numbers too.
and took the word young away from pup.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on July 27, 2013 02:43:57 PM Report

I can understand why this poem has become a favourite surrounding the frail.

 

Well penned Dan

 

MITZEE

Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on May 10, 2010 12:36:35 PM Report

Dan,


What a great poem. Wonderful penned . I really enjoyed the read!!


Angel


Comment By: FreeAndrew on May 5, 2010 11:52:07 AM Report

Your heart is an experiment. Your heart has passed the test.  Your heart has met perfection. Your heart forgives the rest.....by far my favorite stanza in a work full of memorable lines - and all so true.  exceptional work, Dan


Comment By: FreeAdri on May 5, 2010 02:58:40 AM Report
Interesting write.  The usage if repetition is well used in putting the emphasis on the subject. Nice piece, I like it and I like the intensity of it. 
Adri x

Comment By: Freemandate on May 4, 2010 06:47:23 PM Report
Dan,

 

I really liked this. I have always said that as humans we can logic ourselves out of anything. But also as humans the heart will always point the way to what we know is right.

 

Great poem

Manny

Comment By: FreeAngelface on May 4, 2010 11:51:17 AM Report
Dear Dan,

Again you write with such inspiration. It's like you know just what to say at the right moment! Don't ever stop writing! Be of peace and comfort in your writing, and know that God is always with you! Your very talented!! Keep up the wonderful work!

 

GBU Angelface

Comment By: FreesHeRi on May 3, 2010 10:49:35 PM Report
I knew the heart controlled many things but this has put that in perspective. In fact I have under-estimated its value.

 

Good write Dan, I enjoyed this, a bit inspirational, emotional and educational.

 

Sheri

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 3, 2010 08:21:24 AM Report
Well I think sometimes we have to listen to our heart
instead of our mind....There always in battle with each other..... Beautiful as always... your inspiration shows on the parchment.. >> *****
I love this.....If you don't mind I will print this poem
and hang this is my office... Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on May 3, 2010 02:51:41 AM Report
What a beautiful poem.  My heart as certainly been all these.  I really like the repetition.
Tina

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on May 2, 2010 09:49:05 PM Report
I admit it.  I almost missed how you slipped in one line starting with "His"  Cute.
Amazing how the heart does so many things and still has time to keep us alive.
It has a way of bouncing back from the back and waits for the next disaster to happen.
What is the word I'm looking for?        Resilient
I liked the poem
Gene




 


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