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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 8 Comments
Date Added: May 09, 2010 21:05:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Sweet Buttercup
I like your new shoe strings
My sweet buttercup
And your new raspberry lipgloss
Is even better close-up.
 
I love your new hairstyle
My little mint julep
And your new Victoria's purchase
Must be an underwire, push-up.
 
What a smashing new outfit, dear
Did you order straight from Europe?
Oh how I love these pancakes, baby
Just the right sweetness... your gourmet' syrup.
 
I really like your new sunglasses
My bright little tulip
Yes, you look smashing in that new pink top
I love that color on you...and the lacy scallop..
 
No, I didnt notice your sparkling new ring
Please forgive me for my latest slip-up.
But I like the new color that you put on your toes
It matches your new lipgloss...my pretty turnip.
 
Of course, I noticed your new shoe laces
My sweet buttercup
But once in a while I'd like you to notice little ole me
Does it have to be about you from sun down to sun-up?
 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on May 22, 2010 01:55:38 AM Report
Linda Jo

I especially like the last line, I didn't expect it at all.  The other day I asked my husband which should I wear.  This shirt or this sweater.  Being a practical man he said the sweater it might get cold.  That really wasn't the answer I was looking for.

Tina

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on May 17, 2010 09:30:13 PM Report
This is so cute Linda Jo...I loved the rhyming.
Helen
Comment By: FreesHeRi on May 13, 2010 09:52:49 PM Report
Such a cute and sweet treat here. That is how it is for most women,. We need to be noticed so much we buy new things so we emphasize that goal.

 

Enjoyed this piece-a feel good poem..that I needed today.

Sheri

Comment By: FreeAdri on May 10, 2010 05:01:14 AM Report
Very cute, and it ring so true about some, sometimes.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 10, 2010 12:22:23 AM Report
this is as cute as it can be.. of course buttercups!!
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on May 10, 2010 12:20:10 AM Report
Interesting Linda Jo. Can be read in many ways. Like Travis, I agree with the me, me, me part.. In fact this sounds like someone I know.. Let me look again..

 

Yup! it sure does!!!!

 

Hugs

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeAndrew on May 9, 2010 10:46:53 PM Report
you don't normally see buttercups and push-ups in the same work!  but there's a meaning here to appreciate - well done!
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on May 9, 2010 09:56:50 PM Report
Oh this is very cute Linda Jo.  I love your poem!




 


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