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Author Name: Freebarbinar 4 Comments
Date Added: May 13, 2010 20:05:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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He Came
We talked,
He came,
We smiled,
He said my name.
We hugged,
And kissed,
And played the day.
We kissed
And hugged.
He said my name,
And went away.

Time passed,
hearts yearned.
We missed each other;
he returned.
And so today
again we played.
We hugged
and kissed.
But this time
love wins,
and he stays.
Author's Notes:
Relationships can touch us just as deeply whether they are for a day or a lifetime.
First 11 lines; post of a few months ago.  Last 11 lines; post of today.  (You know who you are.)   :)
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Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on September 10, 2010 03:16:01 AM Report
I like this better afterthe edit, and it sounds as if the ending for the two will be AMAZING!



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 14, 2010 09:47:26 PM Report
Awesome poem... Life is crazy.... live like it ends tomorrow....
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on May 14, 2010 03:22:38 AM Report
Hi Barbara, I am glad we met.  You have a lot to offer--much more than you thought you did.  Be true to God and yourself first then  your lover next.

I  am happy to see you here.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 13, 2010 09:19:42 PM Report
Hi Barbara:  very true and nicely presented.

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