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I Miss You

Out of all of the things Iíve done,

which filled me with happiness,

Falling for you was number one.

 

I remember your tenderness

as you sat holding my hand,

which filled me with happiness.

 

I remember the wedding band

playing our favorite tune

as you sat holding my hand.

 

But then you went away too soon,

now I see your face in a cloud,

playing our favorite tune.

 

If I whisper your name out loud,

thatís when I miss you most of all,

I can see your face in a cloud.

 

Just when autumn leaves start to fall,

thatís when I miss you most of all.

Out of all of the things Iíve done,

falling for you was number one.

Author's Notes:
Written in the Terzanelle form.  It's a combination of the villanelle and the terza rima forms.
It was a reaction to a friend of mine's lost of her husband.  Putting myself in her shoes...............
 
 
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