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Date Added: May 16, 2010 18:05:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Miss You
Out of all of the things Iíve done, which filled me with happiness, Falling for you was number one.   I remember your tenderness as you sat holding my hand, which filled me with happiness.   I remember the wedding band playing our favorite tune as you sat holding my hand.   But then you went away too soon, now I see your face in a cloud, playing our favorite tune.   If I whisper your name out loud, thatís when I miss you most of all, I can see your face in a cloud.   Just when autumn leaves start to fall, thatís when I miss you most of all. Out of all of the things Iíve done, falling for you was number one.
Author's Notes:
Written in the Terzanelle form.  It's a combination of the villanelle and the terza rima forms.
It was a reaction to a friend of mine's lost of her husband.  Putting myself in her shoes...............
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