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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 6 Comments
Date Added: May 24, 2010 19:05:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Strong ~*~ As Death
Love is strong as death ...

The fantasies they had
woven for years

 Simply fell apart then was reformed
in new wild colors threaded
with helpless aching love
and desperate need

Now Jealousy once again strikes
its as cruel as the very cold
unforgiving buried grave

The spiritual loving wind
snatched the love words
forever away
....
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Comment By: Freecolin skilton on May 25, 2010 05:32:54 PM Report
when loves sweet flower dies there is no sadder sight or feeling and the truth burns to ash and is lost forever. India such sad words but beautifully written.

Provactive as usual my dear friend.

colinxxx

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on May 25, 2010 05:23:23 PM Report
Wow! A great poem.  This is strange just five minutes ago I was comparing Love to death with another comment I made.  Love can certainly make or break a life.
Tina

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on May 25, 2010 12:43:15 PM Report
Now, don't let a lost love turn you sour.  He was the failure, not your love.  Not all men are like that.  You have much more love in you than to let that bum affect you like that.
I like your love poems better, but this does have a beautiful ring to it
Gene

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on May 25, 2010 01:14:31 AM Report
Beautiful poetry She Whispers.  I enjoyed your poem.
Comment By: FreeAashish on May 24, 2010 10:54:45 PM Report
Deep. like it.
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on May 24, 2010 10:02:25 PM Report
Wow!!  This write is melancholy as well, dear India...When the words of Love are no more---then the flame dies, I feel....

Thank you for bringing us such a detailed look at Love gone wrong....

Margaret......





 


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