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Author Name: Freeredcoatsister 4 Comments
Date Added: May 25, 2010 20:05:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Taser Love
Your love jolts
have live bolts
of electric currents
seizing through out my body.
 
I'm still shaking from my
 first taste of your
painful kiss
on my tender lips.
 
My skin is burning
from where you first
touched me
just now.
 
I'll surely bare a revealing
scar for all to see
tomorrow.
 
Love like yours
makes my feet run with the fastest motions
as far away and as fast as I can,
I'm scared to death of you now.
 
Your love sizzles through my skin,
it's electrifying,
and jarring to my system.
It's too much for me to handle.
 
Nightmares!
I'll have now 
after our only 
moment together.
 
Your passion was a dagger
to my trembling heart
from the very start.
 
Your devotion was as potent yet deadly 
as the sharpest razor dusted with purest cocaine.
 
Your love has left me
               breathless,
                               motionless,
                                                and in traction on the floor,
                                                                                with only the slightest touch.
 
Keep your taser love away from me!
Author's Notes:
This is from Ann's calender suggestion.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAndrew on May 27, 2010 10:05:03 PM Report
talk about getting zapped in the patootie!  sparks are flying with this one - hope you are well-grounded!
Comment By: FreeJo on May 27, 2010 10:28:42 AM Report
Ha, smart girl!  Passion that crazy is bound to do more damage, I guess.  Loved this.  It's got an energy and flow that is superb.  Great job!
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on May 26, 2010 05:58:02 PM Report
Wow!!!  A dynamic description of Love, for sure~!!  Must be a GREAT fellow....*smile*.....Enjoyable read, Tanya...
Margaret...the Baglady

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on May 26, 2010 07:52:41 AM Report
Hmmmm, sounds like you have a wanting of his touch, but fear that it may take you over completely, you run a gamut of emotions with this Tanya, great writing.  Hugs,   Henry




 


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