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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: June 07, 2010 19:06:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Who is the Ghost......
White was the only color he could see
 other ghostly times he looked past me
 
Darkness pasted to his blue eyes
 no winking only impatient stars 
only the dullness on his face 
 
  A union consummated a kept alter
 his image now so unfamiliar
There is not even a trace
 
Now its he who is the ghost....
Author's Notes:
Just for you ...My Darling.....
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Comment By: FreeGlata on June 8, 2010 01:46:48 PM Report
I do have to agree with the others...A haunting write...When love vanishes, it leaves merely a ghostly outline of what used to be.

Haunting...

Hugs...Glata

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on June 8, 2010 11:14:29 AM Report
One can feel the acidic undertones in this poem, your words are extremely venomous Scarlett.   Henry
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on June 7, 2010 11:27:50 PM Report
Sometimes someone's image does fade and become ghostly....When the spark of love disappears and leaves only a trace outline...Chilling write, Ms. India....

Margaret....a friend in words...

Comment By: FreeTerry Russell on June 7, 2010 08:10:12 PM Report
A very interesting perspective for you in a world of many. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. Terry




 


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