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Author Name: Freequeens1 3 Comments
Date Added: June 14, 2010 18:06:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Joy Two-Fold

Sharing my joy with you, I feel it twice

but, feel lighter when hard times come around.

Our laughing together broke the ice,

pain chased away by that happy sound.

Sharing my joy with you, I feel it twice,

intensified and multiplied two-fold,

pain chased away by that happy sound,

finding wonder in you as we grow old,

intensified and multiplied two-fold,

feeling young by the passions ignited,

finding wonder in you as we grow old.

So very grateful we were united.

Sharing my joy with you, I feel it twice,

our laughing together broke the ice.
 
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Author's Notes:
A form called Sontoum I learned about from another poet.  Rhyme pattern:  A1 B1 A2 B2, A1 C1 B2 C2, C1 D1 C2 D2, A1 A2.
Iambic pentameter or tetrameter. 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on June 15, 2010 07:50:24 PM Report
Hello Queens 1,

How ever you came to compose this work: it is a beautiful one!  The joys seem so much joyfuller, the pains so much lighter when they are a shared item between two lovers... 

Greetings: Peter
Comment By: FreeGlata on June 15, 2010 11:39:08 AM Report
A beautiful write done in a neat manner here! Joy, when shared, doubles...Troubles, when shared, are half as badk.

Enjoyed this...

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 14, 2010 06:44:02 PM Report
I liked this write.  Very well done. 

 

Lady Dragonwyck





 


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