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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 7 Comments
Date Added: July 08, 2010 10:07:46 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Wonder where you are?

Wonder where you are?

We live under His stars!!!

God has hands on your world.

Even when life is given a whirl.

 

His hands have man-made scars.

Reminding everyone who we are.

Our names are now written there.

In the clouds He will soon appear.

 

This world will nail you to a cross.

Remember one time you were lost.

Just take another nail for Him.

You found love in a pierced hand!

 

With love He forgives and forgets.

Can we show love with no regrets.

The way of the cross is how to live.

Never easy to forget and forgive.

 
When friends are in short supply.

Be thankful He lives inside.

His own people He can’t deny

One day you cried: “Here am I.”

 

We all have a purpose in this life.
We’re God’s perfect grand design.
He gave us all a heavenly sign.
“Not my will Lord but Thine.”

 
To see beyond your pain.

Walk in someone else’s rain.

No two people suffer the same.

God used dust to build our frame.

Author's Notes:
well been visiting an elder care facility and the many faces with the same look moved my pen to write.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on September 30, 2011 12:40:40 PM Report
Dan



A Wonderfully written  poem.  "with love he forgives and forgets"




Thank you   Dan




Tina

Comment By: FreeMary on September 27, 2011 02:32:59 PM Report
Wow this was a very powerful piece I enjoyed reading it line by line. 

To see beyond your pain.

Walk in someone else’s rain.


No two people suffer the same.


God used dust to build our frame.





this was the stanza that bought it all together i'm glad it was your last





Comment By: TrialGail North on September 21, 2010 08:12:33 PM Report
I love your poem and especially the ~~ to see beyond your pain, walk in someone else's rain~~.  Awesome. So often we rush to judge something we don't really even know what it's about, and then we talk a walk in those shoes and we regret. This is really pretty and i encourage you to continue your writing. You seem to be kind of like me in the way that God gives me the words and I just try to make them rhyme. If you would, please read For The Gazer to Behold. Thanks and keep up the good work.

 

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 26, 2010 01:32:53 PM Report
a touching piece to remind us we are not forgotten. 
encouraging sentiments throughout dan. 
~cindy 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 10, 2010 08:04:25 AM Report
My goodness what a very powerful poem I always enjoy them so human with emotions that express so well...
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 10, 2010 02:35:29 AM Report
...very touching and inspirational piece. I am especially fond of the two lines, "to see beyond your pain, walk in someone else's rain".  You have found inspiration among many faces...thanks for sharing
Comment By: FreeAngelface on July 8, 2010 04:22:05 PM Report
This was absolutely beautiful Dan. Sorry I have been away from cp. I do miss reading here! I pray to soon get back into writing, I've been distracted and need inspiration. You always do just that for me! Keepup the AWESOME work..

 

Angelface





 


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