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Author Name: Freebarbinar 3 Comments
Date Added: July 11, 2010 16:07:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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RE: Ann's Poetry Challenge
Doing It the Hard Way

A single scar; not enough to teach me of life,
so a second was added, a twin to the right.
My spirit tripped on fear of untimely death;
afraid to breathe, I fainted from holding my breath.

Two cancers clawed my chest with tongues of fire;
blood counts off the charts, higher and higher.
I watched as chemo took my hair, my joy, my strength,
and dared not plan ahead for life of any length.

My soul fell into the depths of a hopeless pool;
I cried out, "Be merciful to me, a fool!"
I dared not beg the gods for final peace,
for the only pathway there was death's release.

To act as succor for my constant, gnawing pain
only little white pills could oblivion gain;
but to trade one hell for another I would not conform,
so I merely set sails to endure it...

and rode out the storm.
Author's Notes:
Breast cancer in 1986 and 1988.
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Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on July 12, 2010 01:36:02 PM Report
Hello my friend, I too am glad that you beat the cancer.  It is better to go through life with a part of you missing and have won than have no life left at all.  As you know cancer is what got Carolyn.

An excellent write my dear!

 

Damon

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 11, 2010 05:08:21 PM Report
one of the topics in the calendar was, write about a miracle...my guess this is your miracle.  Congratulations!  a battle you have fought and won...this is a gorgeous poem that showcases your positive spirit...everything about it is excellent...loved the rhymes as well as the meter...just one incredible poem and miracle!  ♥ Jo
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on July 11, 2010 04:45:26 PM Report
Barbara:  WOW!!!  I am very happy with the positive result; and that is quite a write. 

 

Lady D





 


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