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Author Name: PremiumTristan 9 Comments
Date Added: July 20, 2010 00:07:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Echoes of Silence
 
 
Echoes of Silence
 
Across a stone bridge on a hidden brook Ė
a summerís garden Iíve chosen to roam,
shadows and mist of the evening time hide
the valley of my secret home.
 
My thoughts in haze rise, deep in the forest,
the moss drapes my dreams to veil the unknown,
shrouded in passion, secret and somber,
you touch me where Iíve never known.
 
The wishes we share echo in silence
as thoughts of you rise to me from the sea,
though narrow old paths seldom are traveled,
my heart claims youíre walking with me.
 
It would seem simple for us to find joy Ė
if your steps with mine were heard on the stone,
take my hand now and come to my forest...
I canít make this journey alone.

 

 
Author's Notes:
Simple quatrains metered in 10,10,10,8 - syllable lines. 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 3, 2010 05:14:56 PM Report
This is an invitation to love...sweet with exquisite imaginings. A delight to read! Well done!

~Barbara D.~
 

Comment By: FreeJennifer on July 27, 2010 12:28:09 AM Report
like a lullabye this is. Very vivid in detail yet soft as love is. The rhyme  is beautiful and I have gotta say I had a smile on my face the whole poem through. You are quite the poet! I really enjoy reading all your poems. I really feel something at the end of each one of your writes.
Jen enjoying your golden pen

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on July 24, 2010 08:30:38 PM Report
Tristan

A wonderful poem about what love should be.

Tina

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 22, 2010 09:07:05 AM Report
Romantic and full of longing, the heart searches to find its match. You write with such brilliance Tristan, yet, there is always the hidden soul in your writing that captures us all.
~Cindy 

Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 21, 2010 07:11:46 PM Report
This is one of my favorite works of yours :) Beautiful, subtle and elegant.

 

It would seem simple for us to find joy Ė
if your steps with mine were heard on the stone

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 21, 2010 12:33:43 PM Report
For me, a Forest Dweller...(smile) ...this is outstanding...Such gentleness in your lines, Tristan~!!  Always a devine read at your library~!!  Your rhyme delicious~!!
Margaret.....the Crone of Dragonwyck Forest....*smile*

Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on July 20, 2010 10:53:26 PM Report
Similar to they style of Alexander Pope.  You would love his version of the Sapphic Ode. *smile*  This is clever and revealing.  Closing stanza seals the deal.  Nicely done. ~Pamela
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 20, 2010 08:44:46 AM Report
Yes, Life is a very long journey and no-one want to go it alone...
you reach out in such a romantic way ....
I really enjoyed this wonderful poem....

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 20, 2010 03:51:45 AM Report
This is so beautiful! It has longing, love and a realization of love all in one.  You are so right, we can not do this journey alone.
Lovely write
Adri x





 


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