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Author Name: PremiumTristan 11 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2010 21:07:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Parallel Dreams
 
 
 
Parallel Dreams
 
Reality awakens in my heart,
and memories from long ago arise,
now battles cause my dreams to fall apart
and fantasy then crawls away and dies.
The one who should be near is far away,
and you, who dominate my thoughts at night,
are lying with me in a quiet day
and gripping hands, once strong, with all your might.
You lead me from the bed of gentle love,
as we recall the passions one time known:
you raise my head to your warm breast above
and here our story might be left alone.
Will those who know us wonder what you gave --  
and with your gift which one of us you save?
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
An English sonnet written in iambic pentameter for my Muse, referring to our continual dialogue concerning the dreams and realities we experience in our journeys through life.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on December 22, 2020 06:22:32 AM Report

thank you for all your comments and your beautiful poems

dan

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 13, 2010 02:14:41 PM Report
You do sonnets very well Tristan. This was gently romantic and the title was good too.
Alison x
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 27, 2010 12:58:05 PM Report
Once again, Tristan, you have alerted the senses of us who wish to devour your sonnets...*smile*....Your gentle technique with finding the 'just right' words is mind-boggling....I am sure that your Muse shall be delighted and will find even more dreams for you to share....Please know that CP has been gifted with your enrollment....Thanks for a great read, sir poet....

Margaret....a friend in words.....

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 27, 2010 03:01:38 AM Report

The strong title begins a journey with you and clime every emotion, thought and touch with you. It enlightens the soul and embrace the senses. A sonnet of beauty and love, as sonnets were meant to be written. I admire everything about this piece and I love every word. It brings a echo in me my soul lit to the embrace.
Exceptional work Tristan, a special kind of poetry.
Adri x


Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on July 27, 2010 12:35:01 AM Report
the title certainly caught my attention and drew me in...so many great lines found in this poem.  All I can say is...it takes my breath away!   a new favorite to add to my long list...
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 26, 2010 11:40:51 PM Report
What can one say after reading this??
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 26, 2010 10:07:20 PM Report

“Though dreams can be deceiving,

like faces are to hearts, 

they serve for sweet relieving, 

when fantasy and reality lie too far apart.” 


Your poetry is classical and etherial and is surely the sheer delight of your muse. 

~Cindy




Comment By: FreeRobert on July 26, 2010 10:04:05 PM Report
This is good! But as you may have gathered I do not have a poet's education most of my writes are simple rhymes or free verse I have tried a few "forms" The sonnet  is one of my favorites,  I have written a sestina, an acroustic, but that is as far as my experamentation goes

Like I said this is good I enjoyed the read and as Barbara stated "the last two lines are smokin!"

Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 26, 2010 09:57:03 PM Report
Your mastery of the sonnet is astounding Tristan. Another piece superbly well penned :)

 

~*Shell*~

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on July 26, 2010 09:55:47 PM Report
What a beautiful poem Tristan.  I always love your sonnets and poetry.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 26, 2010 09:32:20 PM Report
"The style is the man himself." ~Comte De Buffon Another fine piece written in iambic pentameter...and so much of the man in mix to appreciate. Excellent! Whew...that last two lines are smokin'...

~Barbara D.~





 


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