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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 28 Comments
Date Added: January 25, 2011 00:01:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Whimsical Dancer




 


 




Perchance you find me in the fields of green

Deliciously I prance as a new fawn

In innocence and bashful recklessness

Iím unaware that Iíve awakened dawn.

 

Perhaps you warn me of potential harm

And cast a doubt on my excited mirth

You question choice advising me of cost Ė

"Have you forgotten what the dance is worth?"

 

And if you spy me in the pouring rain

Soaked through in natureís warm liquor divine

Then drink this passion and join in my dream

And gleeful you shall be on freedomís wine.



Author's Notes:

My thanks to my favorite meter man for adding his coins of talent to my meter.


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTimespell on August 20, 2015 11:00:13 PM Report

I'm waiting....

 

Most excellent. Carry on!!

 

:O)

 

~T.S~

Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on August 28, 2014 07:03:13 AM Report

Yes, the metre in the stanzas is good and I like the rhyming couplets.. Very imaginative and well written.. :)
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 3, 2013 05:02:07 AM Report
As your words move accross the page it has the feel of fine silk, well done.
Comment By: PremiumMerv on June 4, 2012 05:13:17 PM Report
You have certainly  put these thoughts into a wonderful mixture and expression. Enjoyed  the time reading and taking in  your thoughts. Excellent 
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on March 30, 2012 04:34:18 PM Report
WONDERFUL EXPRESSION!
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on February 23, 2012 02:50:20 AM Report
It is really a touch and sweet melodious poem dear Cindy! Wonderful imagination!
Comment By: Freenoah count on February 19, 2012 08:54:06 PM Report
My dear, I'd belly-up to the bar of life with you anytime, until then, save a dance for me.  Love the piece (please excuse double entendre).  noah  
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on January 18, 2012 05:26:43 PM Report


I look up to heaven and say it is already filled to the brim with poets like us.



So on this earth letís continue to build and frame the sky with words for a truss.



 


Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on December 29, 2011 10:50:12 PM Report
I love the imagery of your poems and another great example here.  I always feel refreshed after reading these poems.  Thank you - - 



Alistair

Comment By: Freejoey on February 10, 2011 03:58:22 AM Report
What a poem just perfect really. I hope to learn to use words as you do. Beautiful!!!
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on January 25, 2011 09:36:23 PM Report




This is what I have been missing?


Clean out your culls people, I'm going profile diving.




Thank you Cindy for waking me up


Gene




Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 25, 2011 09:05:20 AM Report
Not sure how I missed this first time round but pleased you have given it another airing its so beautifully written always a pleasure to read your work Cindy~Graham.
Comment By: Freejamieson steele on January 25, 2011 01:19:56 AM Report


Cindy,


   Beauty & adventure are thrilling.


"To drink this passion & join you


in a dream" is an awakening to be


rememberd. Especially


since you warn us of danger!




All the best,


for a poet's take


on romance & nature,




Jamieson

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on November 2, 2010 08:38:32 PM Report
Beautiful and perfect iambic pentameter Cindy.

David

Comment By: FreeFilthy on August 16, 2010 07:06:17 PM Report
What a great poem!
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on August 13, 2010 09:09:12 PM Report
Makes me dizzy. I just love it! ML
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 5, 2010 03:23:35 PM Report
Wonderful work Cindy!
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 5, 2010 12:28:35 PM Report
A very delightful read, Cindy...And sometimes, regardless of the price, we just have to dance and live in the moment!

A beautiful dance...

Hugs...Glata

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on July 30, 2010 10:31:52 AM Report
What a beautiful, uplifting poem about the human spirit Cindy. It is so good to see you writing again and in your usual grand style! Your meter man has taught you well.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 30, 2010 10:27:24 AM Report
Soft, gentle and imaginative, Cindy~!......Playful thoughts unfolding in poetry...

Margaret....a friend in words...

Comment By: FreeTristan on July 30, 2010 12:44:07 AM Report
Beautifully written and always with a stroke of artistic flair.  Your meaning seems to impart a sophisticated and somewhat subtle level of depth in its playful interaction between the innocent and the protector, between dream and reality.  Remarkable relational insight in so few lines.  Nice work.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on July 30, 2010 12:40:36 AM Report
What a magical poem.  Very charming poem!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 30, 2010 12:23:27 AM Report
Wonderful penning Cindy, truly a delight to read. Bravo!

~Barbara D.~ 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 29, 2010 11:27:28 PM Report

Boy you do have a way about you like no-other...beautiful....


Comment By: FreeAndrew on July 29, 2010 11:22:30 PM Report

Soaked through in natureís warm liquor divine Then drink this passion and join in my dream And gleeful you shall be on freedomís wine - beautiful - and while i wouldn't know poetic meter from a traffic meter, i know this is wonderfully lilting poem - you are back on top!


Comment By: FreeAlfred Berggren on July 29, 2010 11:17:28 PM Report
Nice meter structure in your Quatrains with lines 2 and 4 rhyming. I'd like to join you, if I may. I'll toss cares aside and drink the nectar of the gods with you.
Comment By: FreeRobert on July 29, 2010 11:11:14 PM Report
Cindy this is a wonderful picture of nature. Everyone knows Walt Disney's Bambi but this poem brought to mind  a scene from the novel Bambi

 by Felix Salten probably no longer in print for I read it when I was a child. I enjoyed this very much!

Comment By: FreeSteve on July 29, 2010 10:54:42 PM Report
We take our inspiration wherever it can be found :-)




 


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