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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 7 Comments
Date Added: July 29, 2010 23:07:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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It Means Forever

As I write this my head leans back and I am in the darkness

Uncontrolled feelings flow through me deep in to my soul

Am I alive something struck me straight through the heart

She reached out to hold me I slip down and keep falling so far

Always the one I wanted free of all other things only what I need

Itís a journey that seems so far away from memories and hope

I see sorrow and I feel hate these emotions are lifted from me

Now life slowly moves around showing me what I need to sacrifice  

 

Author's Notes:
A man is sitting a chair,  falls asleep and begins to dream. He is feeling emotions from past relationships that didn't go well and concerned it will have an affect on his new found love.  He is determined to move on and accept what he has for what it can be.       
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 9, 2010 05:48:05 PM Report
WE are our experiences...You can't block out the ones you find convenient...LIke an aging fighter, the more bouts we have with love, the more scars we carry.But then again....women think scars on a man are COOL.. :o)..len
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 2, 2010 02:27:30 PM Report
Stevie, 
Some past relationships never leave us it seems. 'It Means Forever', is an apt title for this dream filled poem.
~Cindy = )

Comment By: FreeGlata on July 30, 2010 01:20:48 PM Report
It's a difficult journey, my friend...but well worth the effort!

Enjoyed reading this...

Hugs to ya :-)

Glata

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 30, 2010 10:39:15 AM Report
Dear Steve....I have always believed that true poetry comes from the poet's deepest part of their heart...I could feel each and every painful experience within your lines...Even though there is anguish, there is thoughts of a new beginning....Enjoyed the write...

Margaret...a friend in words...

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 30, 2010 07:20:58 AM Report
Life can do that to us all..Trying to get our life back on track so many sacrifices to make to just try to be happy...
you always reach out when you write I love that in you....

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on July 30, 2010 12:37:34 AM Report

Your poem was very moving.  I'm not sure I understand all of it, but it the intensity and what a special moment of discovery this was for you.  Great poem Steve!


Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 30, 2010 12:19:22 AM Report
It seems this poem is filled with emotional turmoil...the journey isn't easy but having hope makes it easier.

~Barbara D.~





 


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