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Author Name: FreeTristan 8 Comments
Date Added: September 07, 2010 18:09:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Come To Me - For Cindy
 
 
Come To Me
 
~ for Cindy ~
 

 

When morning’s glory sets your heart aglow,
the early breeze of dawn begins to blow,
your heart is light and free with fantasy,
then bring your happy mem’ries – share with me.
And when your thoughts become obscure and deep
with promises too far away to keep,
and should you wonder of your destiny,
imagine slightly deeper – dream of me.
When answers found are hard to understand,
you need someone to hold your trembling hand,
when you can only murmur a hushed plea,
then share your heartfelt questions – turn to me.
If loneliness should make your heart its own,
and there’s an emptiness you’ve always known,
when shattered dreams become reality,
just bring the broken pieces – come to me.
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
Rhyming couplets in iambic pentameter.
 
I've written poetry because it was good for me; I've written because something inside of me told me to -- but I've never written because someone asked me to... to write a poem for them.  So here's a first -- for Cindy.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on November 19, 2010 08:41:34 AM Report
A beautiful poem for a beautiful woman - well done Tristan.

David

Comment By: FreeMichelle on September 23, 2010 01:49:17 PM Report
This is a wonderful expression of what it means to have a strong relationship with someone. Very beautiful and touching, and I am sure Cindy appreciates this deeply :)

Well done Tristan!

Shell
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on September 11, 2010 02:41:47 PM Report
Tristan

This absolutely beautiful.  I feel as if I want to cry.  A friend like that is just so incredibly specially.  If everyone had a friend like that I am sure the world would be a better place.  I think I have a friend like this and I have been meaning to write a poem for her, but I know it could never match this wonderful piece.

Tina

Comment By: FreeAdri on September 8, 2010 04:50:57 AM Report
Wow, stunning write, special. 
Adri x
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 7, 2010 08:50:08 PM Report
This is a lovely poem...well done!

~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 7, 2010 06:55:17 PM Report
Oh >>>My......Now this is a real poem of emotions so well undressed with such style and grace....
Breathless is the mysterious words to express... every thing we all feel inside...
 Your such a brilliant writer.... Our blessing indeed....

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 7, 2010 06:49:48 PM Report
Tristan...be prepared...you will be getting requests by the thousands...this has to be my all time favorite poem of  yours! 

 

  favorite line, "and should you wonder of your destiny, imagine slightly deeper-dream of me"  but I adore the last line too...well the whole thing is just awesome! 

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 7, 2010 06:44:29 PM Report
I am breathless. Only you can know what this makes me feel. Your signature is all over every perfect line and every syllable. Stellar poetry as always. I am blessed to have linked with your kindred spirit.
Thank you Tristan for your open heart and the bond we share. 
~Cindy xo






 


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