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Comment By:  Barbara Demasson on June 5, 2011 10:10:41 AM |
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Should I understand this to be a mis-step that gave you the feeling of free falling? I thought perhaps it was because of the line, "it was just one step down to the roof". I went sky diving in beautiful British Columbia a few years ago...what a rush. Loved it! I enjoyed this poem...very nice!
~Barbara D.~
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| Comment By: Graham Jones on October 3, 2010 03:46:59 AM |
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Would be bad enough during the day but at night!,They would hear the screams across two continents and I still would'nt be sure If either were mine, an interesting write Linda Jo~Graham.
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| Comment By: Andrew on September 27, 2010 04:02:10 PM |
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me thinks he was thinking of the same streaking that i was thinking (which i have, by the way), but as always i enjoy your special twist. the night skies can put on one helluva show, can't it?
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| Comment By: She Whispers on September 26, 2010 09:42:53 PM |
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This is awesome.... I have streaked!!! God it was just a great experiance...... all the opened mouths.....
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| Comment By: Steve on September 26, 2010 09:28:38 PM |
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Raw naked emotions in your write.
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| Comment By: Cindy Bendel on September 26, 2010 08:07:06 PM |
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ha ha Linda J...my son went sky diving for the first time this weekend. He called, uncommon for a saturday morning to just say,"I love you, I'm going sky diving Mom".I think I would like to try your version of "sky diving". Very creative and a fun read.
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| Comment By: Robert on September 26, 2010 12:37:45 PM |
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I for one agree with you Linda I would love to sky dive just once to experence the thrill. I know, however that it will pale beside the thrill of falling in love for nothing on God's Green earth will ever equal that experence IMHO
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on September 26, 2010 10:21:51 AM |
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Linda: GREAT write!!!! When younger I thought about trying it; never did though and NOW --- no thank you!!!! Maybe in a write but NOT in REALITY!!!!
Lady D -- hey Gene, calm down, it's okay --- you and I will just get the coffee ready for when Linda Jo "lands"
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| Comment By: e. Gene Myers on September 26, 2010 08:15:54 AM |
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Sky diving?????? Are you nuts? What could possibly make you step from a perfectly good airplane into the blackness of night? Heck ... What could possibly make you step from a perfectly good airplane into the nothingness of day time?
No thank you. I'll wait on the ground. I have a yellow streak along my spine and chicken feathers on my body.
Gene
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