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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 9 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2010 23:09:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Streaking
 
 
taking me by the hand
you were eager to show
your recent discovery...
your new thrill
 
we quickly climbed the winding stairwell
eight flights to the top
you held the door open
and motioned for me to exit..........                                   
                                            
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falling stars
 
                           
and steaking city lights
 
 
told me  
 
 
I  was    
                         
 
free 
 
 
 
 
falling............                                                        
                          
 
                                       
 
                                                           
 
it was just one step down to the roof
but the open sky aglow with city lights,
the falling moon, and streaking stars
made me feel as though I had just stepped
off the roof into the blackness waiting below
 
 
dizzy and breathless from the climb
I discovered the thrill...the total rush
 
 
of sky diving at night.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
thanks to Steve for the prompt, "streaking".  It came from a discussion about his recent post, Have You Ever?
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 5, 2011 10:10:41 AM Report
Should I understand this to be a mis-step that gave you the feeling of free falling? I thought perhaps it was because of the line, "it was just one step down to the roof". I went sky diving in beautiful British Columbia a few years ago...what a rush. Loved it! I enjoyed this poem...very nice!



~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on October 3, 2010 03:46:59 AM Report
Would be bad enough during the day but at night!,They would hear the screams across two continents and I still would'nt be sure If either were mine, an interesting write Linda Jo~Graham.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on September 27, 2010 04:02:10 PM Report

me thinks he was thinking of the same streaking that i was thinking (which i have, by the way), but as always i enjoy your special twist.  the night skies can put on one helluva show, can't it?


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 26, 2010 09:42:53 PM Report
This is awesome.... I have streaked!!! God it was just a great experiance...... all the opened mouths.....
Comment By: FreeSteve on September 26, 2010 09:28:38 PM Report
Raw naked emotions in your write.       
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 26, 2010 08:07:06 PM Report

ha ha Linda J...my son went sky diving for the first time this weekend. He called, uncommon for a saturday morning to just say,"I love you, I'm going sky diving Mom".
I think I would like to try your version of "sky diving". 
Very creative and a fun read.
~Cindy 


Comment By: FreeRobert on September 26, 2010 12:37:45 PM Report
I for one agree with you Linda I would love to sky dive just once to experence the thrill. I know, however that it will pale beside the thrill of falling in love for nothing on God's Green earth will ever equal that experence IMHO
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 26, 2010 10:21:51 AM Report
Linda:  GREAT write!!!!  When younger I thought about trying it; never did though and NOW --- no thank you!!!!  Maybe in a write but NOT in REALITY!!!! 

 

Lady D -- hey Gene, calm down, it's okay --- you and I will just get the coffee ready for when Linda Jo "lands"

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on September 26, 2010 08:15:54 AM Report
Sky diving??????      Are you nuts?  What could possibly make you step from a perfectly good airplane into the blackness of night?  Heck ... What could possibly make you step from a perfectly good airplane into the nothingness of day time?
No thank you.  I'll wait on the ground.     I have a yellow streak along my spine and chicken feathers on my body.
Gene





 


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