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Author Name: FreeTristan 7 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2010 23:09:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Sonnet Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Ever Friends - For Linda Jo
 
 
 
 

Ever Friends

 

When there are questions in your dreamy eyes,

there always is a friend who is close by

to wipe a tear away before it dries,

reminding you how high that eagles fly.

Midst dreamworlds now on which your heart relies

and creates for the world your wondrous flair,

remember he who softly stood by you,

forget not, in the shadows, he was there.

And know that as you give your heart to one,

there will, in time, be love returned to you;

since love of dearest friends canít be undone,

and heartbeats tell you just how much I care,

when hands fall silent in the setting sun,

remember in your heart Ė Iím always there.

 
 
 
Author's Notes:
A Sonnet written in iambic pentameter using an Italian rhyme scheme borrowed from P. B. Shelley.  The poem is a response to a request by Sheedreams that I write a poem for her.  How can so serious a request from such a valued friend be denied?  I only wish my weak attempt here could do justice to our friendship...  which is to rise above the level of mediocrity and soar on the wings of eagles.  Thanks for being there for me, LJ. 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on June 2, 2011 07:09:00 PM Report


As I take the time to read this poem again...I just wanted you to know how much it still means to me.  thanks again!  Well now I know when You wish it...and I dream it...it will come true.  The part about, "as you give your heart to one, there will, in time, be love returned to you"  has happened in my life.  Love has certainly come knocking, and I have swung open the door...This poem is very sentimental to me.  You are amazing and I am honored to be counted as your friend.


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 29, 2010 11:38:12 AM Report
You did her proud Tristan. Linda Jo is a loving, giving soul and there is nothing better than being able to immortalise someone in words. Well written as always Alison x
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 27, 2010 01:48:36 PM Report
This is amazing, your sonnets are always so amazing Tristan. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 26, 2010 10:25:35 AM Report
Tristan:  a beautiful poem for a truly lovely friend.  Linda Jo is a wonderful lady and a good friend. 

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 26, 2010 07:15:02 AM Report
So very beautiful the love between friends is a rare and joyous love always....
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 26, 2010 01:14:37 AM Report

What a lovely sonnet for Linda Jo! She is a dear and lovely woman and your words of friendship are beautiful and comforting to her I am sure. Friendship is such a precious gift. Linda Jo is blessed to have a friend as dear as you Tristan. Beautiful words for a beautiful woman.
~Cindy 


Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on September 26, 2010 12:05:57 AM Report
Tristan, I am touched beyond...well, beyond words. I can't deny your beautiful poem has brought me to tears!  Your heartfelt wishes mean so much to me...but most of all I appreciate your friendship from which this poem springs.  thank you, sincerely and abundantly...Linda 

 

I am honored and will enter it among my favorites...♥





 


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