Today Is: Saturday, March 06, 2021 09:28 PM. Our Topic of the Week: Memories
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 7 Comments
Date Added: October 20, 2010 22:10:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 229
Total Views
Members: 40
Unique Members: 16
Guests: 950

Type: Unspecified
Category: Calendar Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Ann's Poetry Calendar...The Fading Colors of Love
 
once their love was vivid...
and sparkling white
 
sapphire words from the holy book
announced the special day
 
"many waters are not able to extinguish love,
nor can rivers themselves wash it away"  *
 
she wished to walk with him where
the yellow grass grows knee-high
 
yellow jonquils filled a cheerful bouquet
pink lips, blushed cheeks, bubbly champagne
 
he longed to splash in aqua pools
near the silver sand dunes
 
but somewhere along the way
his brown eyes faded to icy blue
 
he put on a purple robe;
in a black and blue kingdom he reigned
 
three brown speckled eggs; a gift
country cream, pumpkin spice, bittersweet
 
a black parade, acrid words dyed wasabi green
no more red kites, red balloons, red satin sheets
 
now their love has faded...
to hoarfrost white
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
Ann's Calendar for Oct. 20... the fading colors of love
 
* scriptural text from Song of Solomon 8:7
Report Offensive Poem.

'Ann's Poetry Calendar...The Fading Colors of Love' Copyright © Linda Jo
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: TrialAnn on October 26, 2010 06:41:20 PM Report
Nicely articulated and the visual was especially poignant. Great interpretation.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 22, 2010 06:37:00 PM Report
very powerful delivery about fading love, Linda Jo...That Soloman was no Elvis, but he had his share of hits in his day...len
Comment By: FreeAndrew on October 21, 2010 12:07:58 PM Report
at first i wondered if my eyes were getting worse, but then i realized what you had done.  and then i read the words - how marvelous!  the story you tell of love fading away, the images you use - just awesome.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 21, 2010 02:43:36 AM Report
You have done yourself proud! I love this piece of stunning work! =))

~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeMelody on October 20, 2010 10:54:26 PM Report
omg what an extremely amazing poem. Your words captured the readers attention from the very start, colors that dazzled the mind and emotions that held the heart in a velvet glove of color.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 20, 2010 10:52:33 PM Report
My goodness you  do have a way with words that so well express!!
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on October 20, 2010 10:29:26 PM Report
Excellent Linda Jo!!!! 
A really stunning read. Love how you faded out the words gradually, just like lost love it fades a bit at a time.
~Cindy 





 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 52
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday


 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2021 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.