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Author Name: Freeredcoatsister 6 Comments
Date Added: November 07, 2010 08:11:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Where I Go When I Sleep

Where I Go When I Sleep

When I close my eyes I travel to the land where the lion roams and roars the night away. Where monkey’s travel from limb to limb and frequently beat their chests to show the mighty spirit.

 

A place where I ride an elephant across the land and wave

At the hippos covered in mud to cool and protect their skin.

 

Where I can shake my khaki hips to the jungle beat

In my bare feet, a place where I can grunt instead of speak.

A place where pink dolphins frolic and squeak.

 

A place where even I can afford to eat.

That’s where I go when I sleep.

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
Fantasy and imagination prose.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMelody on November 7, 2010 08:08:10 PM Report
Your imagination took me on a trip of unbelievable wonder

excellent write

Comment By: FreeMaples on November 7, 2010 03:34:00 PM Report
Oh, I love this! Such a great imagination you have! I would have never thought of this, its such a neat fantasy!

 

Meg

Comment By: FreeRobert on November 7, 2010 11:55:11 AM Report
very good, shows a poet's imagenation and the picture painted is done very well I can just picture those "Khaki hips" gyrating Nuff said!
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on November 7, 2010 10:51:03 AM Report
Sounds like a wonderful place to be Tanya, you got any room for a passenger??  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on November 7, 2010 09:53:07 AM Report
yes, this piece could easily be entered under the topic, my last vacation.   when we close our eyes and dream it is a free trip of the day.  loved the spark of creative energy in these lines.  you got us wondering...where will Tanya's dreams take her next?? 
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 7, 2010 09:17:04 AM Report
Very well done, I really like the way you show and not tell where it is you go when you sleep. This was delightful Tanya. I think this would be a great idea for a challenge. The "shake my khaki hips to the jungle beat" was perfect. I love this!

~Barbara D.~ *admiring Tanya's talent*





 


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