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Author Name: Freebehind_blue_eyes 1 Comments
Date Added: December 18, 2010 06:12:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Goodbye Goodbye

Hello hello, goodbye goodbye

I lost the beauty of clear blue sky.

I lost the mountains bathed in green

I lost the want, the will to dream.

 

I lost the smell from each new rain,

I chose blind numbness over pain.

I lost the feel of summer breeze,

I lost the peace, of a mind at ease

 

I lost belief, unwavering trust.

Drowning, my soul began to rust.

I did not see, I did not hear;

I lost the ones who once did care.

 

From my shadow, bathed in grey

I lost my path, I lost my way.

Worth nothing; I know this much is true

Goodbye goodbye, I lost me too.  

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeS on December 18, 2010 01:14:15 PM Report
wow this was really sad

nice writing and creative expression





 


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