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Comment By:  Dean on February 24, 2012 02:49:48 PM |
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Berries are full of goodness. Your brilliant poem , makes me go after them every day, lol, loved it, ~Dean
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Comment By:  John Armlovich on February 24, 2012 09:19:21 AM |
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mmmm..... blackberries... I always liked blueberries better but they are indeed good. I liked this poem, makes my mouth drip with longing for blackberries now,
John
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| Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on February 24, 2012 08:46:05 AM |
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What an exquisite poem!
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| Comment By: Dirk Kruger on February 24, 2012 05:32:46 AM |
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i'm not a big berrie person at all, mainly i think cause it's not that freely ( that i have seen , but i'm a male what do i know) available in South Africa. I DO have one berry that i'm madly in love with and that's my BlackBerry that i carry in my pocket. ( MOBILE PHONE ) LOVE THE POEM , THINK IT'S BRILLIANT
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| Comment By: e. Gene Myers on February 23, 2012 06:42:48 PM |
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Ah ha, Someone else who loves black berries. How did I miss this one the first time you posted it. This is delightful. Now, you know why I wrote my poem. It's to teach people like you how to pick black berries easier than one at a time. It really works. And for those of you who worry about clipping whole bunches, they come back the next year in a fury. The cutting stimulates them.
Black berries as jewelry ...hmmmm Have to think on that.
Thanks for another view of a beautiful and delicious berry.
Gene
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| Comment By: The Bag Lady on January 14, 2011 05:22:23 PM |
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Well, it might be the style of Pablo Neruda, but you have brought us a sensous, vibrant write for the senses, Ljo~!! However, it was done in great taste and a joy to read and ponder...AWESOME~! Nice to read from your library shelf~!
Just me, ol' Margaret....
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| Comment By: Cindy Bendel on January 11, 2011 10:29:05 PM |
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a delight to the senses, a joy to read. exquisite writing dear.
~cindy = )
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| Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on January 10, 2011 10:09:54 PM |
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Something's wrong with my face. I can't stop smiling. My memories of blackberries include unbearable heat, scratched hands and arms, and fear of rattlesnakes. I like yours better. ML
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| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on January 7, 2011 08:55:58 PM |
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Most enjoyable read! Great penning...it left me both satisfied and hungry! *smiles* Two purple thumbs up! =))
~Barbara D.~
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| Comment By: jamieson steele on January 6, 2011 01:30:36 PM |
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Dear Lady,
The contrast between nature & its gifts
including a woman of grace as the author
is more than
a written word,
it's a living word.
Thanks for sharing
a glimpse of life
with us.
Sincerely,
Jamieson
P.S. Neruda was never this good
or versed.
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| Comment By: Graham Jones on January 6, 2011 01:27:53 PM |
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And you have done a fine job of it,, breath takingly sensual with a warmth that is almost tangible, enough
to send ones imagination off on a flight of its own,truly a work of art in its own right~Graham.
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on January 6, 2011 09:52:36 AM |
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Linda Jo: love this -- please do more in this styling.
Lady D
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| Comment By: She Whispers on January 6, 2011 08:52:46 AM |
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Great job as I read I must look up his style of writing I enjoyed this as always......Your really a gifted woman....
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| Comment By: Robert on January 6, 2011 03:11:50 AM |
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Sensual and erotic the images you bring forth, as to Mr. Neruda I find that you have emulated his poetry very well . very good you erstwhile Cajun you!
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