| Comment By: HOPE on January 19, 2011 12:49:33 PM
Your words are vivid expressing wonderful colors that nature gives us. It's just up to us to take the time and look at it's beauty. Thank you so much for bringing my thoughts to a wonderful peaceful place.
| Comment By: Alfred Berggren on January 18, 2011 11:06:51 AM
|There's gold in your poem and its beauty shines out like the rays of the sun. It's enough for me to find your poem's gold than have to buy some donkeys and look for that old Dutchman's mine. What a wast of time that would be, but not a waste of time reading your poem.|
| Comment By: The Bag Lady on January 14, 2011 05:18:00 PM
Ahhhh, you gave us a wonderful kaliedascope of your vision of your surroundings, dear poetess...Just a treat from beginning to end....You brought us to what you see, and there is always clarity in your nature writing....Nice work, as usual, Ljo~!
Apricots and blueberries,...Margaret
| Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on January 10, 2011 08:49:21 PM
|Oh, how I love this! Every line a poem. And at the end I felt mariah blowing through my hair. You are so good at nature poems. I was there in the heat of August when everything was dirt colored. You make me see it all in color. What a sight. This goes into Favorites. Nice work. ML|
| Comment By: Bruce A. Peaslee on January 10, 2011 06:18:31 PM
Linda Jo- What a colorful description; The "apricot sky and blueberry rock formations" line evoked an accurate description of the late afternoon Arizona skyline that I remember when I was in Scottsdale in the late 80's. I really liked this.
| Comment By: She Whispers on January 9, 2011 10:09:14 PM
|oh you do have a way with expressions words...awesome!!|
| Comment By: jamieson steele on January 9, 2011 04:46:52 PM
"Wind they call Mariah"
"the sun will always shine".
It's about love & nature
& the feelings
of young love.
Gogi Grant & Frankie Lane
express this sentiment
so very beautifully
lyrical melodies & harmonies.
All the best
for lyrical melodies
supported by love's harmonies,
| Comment By: Robert on January 9, 2011 12:24:54 PM
Beautiful picture of the morning sunrise my CF in your land of Arizona Almost as beautiful as the sunrise over a peaceful yet noise loud swamp with the bellow of alligators, and the chirps and twitter of songbirds and the whoosh of the wind beneaththe wings of waterfowel.
You are one heck of a poet my CF more to share please!