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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 11 Comments
Date Added: October 06, 2011 13:10:25 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
My Revelation

On morns break, with the sun slowly rising;
I sat out on my porch and watched the beauty of the new horizon
Tears come so easily
And I let them fall
For such beauty before me, I rarely saw.

I have never noticed the way the sky, so blue;
looked as the sun slowly came forth
Or the way the heavens parted, clouds softly formed,
As they made their way to separate for the new mornings dawn.

I was tired, yes, but still wide awake
For you see..
There was so many things I still had to partake
So many things I needed to do
But still I sat, and watched as the new morning came through.
Then a knock came
Softly, yet heard
I went to answer and here is what occurred.

Revelation came and knocked at my door this very night
I answered and stepped aside, for such a heavenly sight
With it along came Reason, and no more Doubt;
And Happiness, Passion, along with no more Pain
All tied together neatly in a bow;
with a string attached which was tied just so.

We sat for awhile, myself and my new friends
Talking about long ago, memories, the new trends
I asked them why they came;
yet I think I already knew.

Reason stood forth and took my hand
And within her smile, I knew she understands
Then behind her moved in no more Doubt
Then Happiness and Passion, soon came about.
And off to the side, I saw Revelation again
Slowly she moved towards me
And together they formed and all spread out their hands.

No more Pain stood behind,
for she was there to protect
My rock when I would need her
which was forever I suspect.
I felt all move within me
Their hands touching just so
Each and every one of them
Bringing a lesson to bestow.
I felt Reason come in, then next no more Doubt
Then Passion came slowly, for she was so rare;
and had many things she had to share.
Next came Happiness, then no more Pain...
And all together they began my change..
My body tingled;
my heart overflowed.

What I once held dear;
was now disposed.

I saw clearly now
Things I never saw before
I looked around,
then walked to my patio door.

As I walked outside;
I saw the strangest thing
Sights I have seen before
Yet never meant a thing.
I saw the sunrise start to rise,
Its beauty surreal
I felt a tug at my heart
Then slowly stated to feel.

A new feeling then
Came slowly inside
I had not noticed her before
But she was standing watching to the side.
Her name was Love
So pure and divine
And as she went inside me
I felt this feeling slowly unwind.

A heart that I took for granted
Now started to feel
Sights, I never looked at
Were now different and surreal.
Oh such beauty laid before me
And I gasped at all the many sights
For never before had I wondered on my surroundings
Never before had I felt it was my given right.
And with her I would begin to learn
See the many things she had to share
Feel what was meant for me
To cherish and lean how very rare.
For life was a gift, you see
Chosen for us once long ago
And tonight I was given a second chance
To see what I had once let go.

So standing back now, I held out my arms,
And felt these new feelings come in.
Rare they were..Yet wonderful all the same
And suddenly I realized;
I was no longer afraid.

With joy in my heart, I turned to see the sun rise;
it was then I felt my tears
So this was Love, I whispered so soft;
as she wiped away my fears.

I stood immobile,
My eyes taking in all
Such beauty stood before me
Such wonder and peace, I do recall.
A sigh broke through
It was then I understood
All along what I have been missing
Now was at my fingertips, as it always should. 

Tears I now wept
Of beauty, not pain
Of moments I shall now treasure;
for my life would never be the same.

So as I watched the sun rise;
my thoughts were on all before.
A smile broke out on my lips;
as I began to recall.

The knock on my door last night;
which I opened and let in.
Turned out to be my Revelation.
My now truth and new best friend...
Author's Notes:
Photo Courtesy by Donna R Tivoli and Kelly Oshita.

A poem I did before, only added some changes for my life has changed since writing this.

This is the new me, or what I hope shall be the new me after finding feelings I had lost so long ago...


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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 7, 2011 08:37:51 PM Report
This is a finely-told story of spiritual rebirth. I have known this revelation in my life so the message is no stranger to me.

When all the philosophical and intellectual points have been made about the nature of life, the simple fact of love trumps it all. Love is a truth beyond all reason.

"So this was Love, I whispered so soft;

as she wiped away my fears.

That says it all...len

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on October 7, 2011 10:45:12 AM Report

A work so lovely, it cannot be denied

Truth to tell, I'll confess that I cried

You eloquence and way with words shines through

O' Moon Star, there cannot be another you

After reading this poem, my spirits were lifted

But what else could I expect, from a poet so gifted?


Brava, m'lady, beautifully done....this one is a keeper! <3



Comment By: FreeStar on October 6, 2011 08:32:10 PM Report

Wow, this is absolutely beautiful, Moonie.  Into my faves.  



Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on October 6, 2011 08:20:52 PM Report

The truth has set you free.

The darkness has yielded to the Light.

The bench at the park is now on your front porch.

Seating for all of your new friends.

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on October 6, 2011 05:51:03 PM Report
Moonie, each time you write you just surpass every expectation I have, this is so incredibly beautiful to read, wow!  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on October 6, 2011 04:29:27 PM Report
This is incredible writing, was reading it like i was eating chocolate cake, love it, well done

Comment By: FreeDean on October 6, 2011 02:09:31 PM Report
Moonie, enjoyed it immensely,
A true love always does the trick. It gives you wings to fly. It breaks your shackles apart. It frees you and allows you to be yourself. The you become totally revealed to the core, and there follows the true and real happiness, not a  moment of fear exist. 

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on October 6, 2011 01:49:11 PM Report
Moonie, as I read this tears too filled my eyes, it's so beautiful and touches my heart so deeply.  I so love this poem with my entire being.  Tina
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on February 3, 2011 07:58:43 PM Report
I feel as though I've been enlightened...gifted with something so beautiful, profound, gentle...something truly unique from the realm of MoonStar.  I love how you have personified happiness, passion, reason, beauty, love, and yes, truth.  I enjoyed this so very much...thank you, my dear!
Comment By: FreeRobert on February 3, 2011 12:24:17 PM Report
This i, as I said elsewhere rather long. However if one decides against reading it because of it's length then one has miised words gilded woth truth and full of emotion. Your words add to the picture posted and the picture itself doesn't subtract from your words. However I believe that even without the picture you have a great poem  I'm certianly glad you posted it here for the more that are perivlided to read it the more accolades it will gather. You have magic in your pen Twinie
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on February 3, 2011 09:01:39 AM Report
How very beautiful Moonie, the cloudy veil of uncertainty has been lifted as the sunrise depicts a new chapter in your life, a dawn of understanding.  Hugs,  Henry


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