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Author Name: Freelaura_robertson13 2 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2011 09:03:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Red with Love
She opened up her heart to you rather like a door opening to a stranger the night was cold - bitter cold harsh winds were taking hold when she took your blue hands in hers and made them red with love.
She gave you life and hope when everything seemed quite lost she taught you things you didn't know could exist, she lifted up that drowning mist, she blew warm air onto your face and made your cheeks red with love.
And this woman is your saviour there when no others were an explosion after a deep silence pain's now past tense for she loves you too and it's made your heart red with love.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeM J W Hayes on March 14, 2011 03:25:49 PM Report


A lovely tender piece, Laura, with thoughtful metaphors from the domestic to the cosmic big bang.


Nice.


Michael

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on March 14, 2011 09:28:18 AM Report
WOW, Nice





 


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