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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 4 Comments
Date Added: March 22, 2011 10:03:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The silence and thorns

The forests of apathy

In the village of the scorned

Where love is laid to waste

Amidst the silence and thorns

 

Trees with  leaves of green abound

Smiles on the faces of the forlorn

Still none hear the quiet cries

Amidst the silence and thorns

 

For this is the fate of the unloved

In this place where heartache is born

Lost inside this village here

Amidst the silence and thorns

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
Just wondering outloud of what becomes of the brokenhearted.
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Comment By: FreeWide Awake on March 25, 2011 10:48:46 AM Report


Nice use of metaphor here…great imagery!



When you are lost in a wandering maze

wrapped in the shawls of apathy’s daze

squelched by a love that perish and rust

courting a village that’s founded in dust

let forlorn sorrows & mist from the tears

rise to the Lord…who vanquish all fears

turn to love faithful, that perishes never

in pastures green by still-watered rivers.



Pamela


Comment By: FreeMoonStar on March 23, 2011 12:21:01 AM Report
What a sad, yet oh so beautiful, piece Henry. I loved the images it brought forth.. Yes, the song came to mind and I found myself humming to it as I read your words..



This was divine..



Hugs,

Moonie xx


Comment By: FreeGlata on March 22, 2011 07:56:08 PM Report


You're writing a lot of "broken heart" writes of late! Hope that all is well with you...


This is a really good poem with a twist on that song. As always, a great write!


Hugz...Glata

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on March 22, 2011 11:37:24 AM Report
if you are talking about the Colin Bluntstone song , i'll have to listen to it again...i guess they remain broken until someone comes along and fix it...nice poem enjoyd it





 


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